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A follow up to Vicious Cycle. Really more of a complementary piece as they both tackle the exact same issue. This one is just longer and from a different perspective.

I am actually somewhat content with this piece. It is one the longest ones I have written in a while. I generally like to stay as condensed as possible but I decided to let loose somewhat. I should do this more often to avoid sounding so robotic in my writings.

~Just so long as you do not go overboard with it.~

I know. There is a sweet spot. Too much and it feels like fluff; too little and it sounds robotic. Years of writing very condensed college papers have caused this. A different medium requires a different mindset. As condensed as possible is good for academics but not art.

~Who would have thought that you would have learned something from writing vore-themed pieces?~

I did not! I am still scared though.

Edit: I do not know why I had the title centered here and in my word processor. I fixed that from seeming so out of place.

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