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It's finally done! This thing was a doozy, with about 11.5K words and 35 characters gallivanting around.
Anyway! This is the Opening Ceremony to the 2nd Goddess Tournament. Here you'll see short briefs of all 32 fighters, get a glimpse at the current state of the world and Clutch, and even get a closer look at the current goddesses of this world. It was uploaded ahead of the actual Tournament being completed so as to provide something meaty for people to sink their teeth into as work continues apace on the Goddess Tournament. A few things to note is that there is no actual vore in here, though there are naughty shenanigans aplenty, and none of the fights will be nearly this kind of length.
Hope you enjoy it. If you've got a favorite character feel free to leave a comment rooting for them!
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Posted by Jack 7 years ago Report
I really had to laught at this point in Sarah's desrcription. "...despite the almost unnerving desire of humans to fuck everything."
A good explanation for all the different hybrid races for sure. ^^
In general, I enjoyed reading this. Much more entertaining than the previously provided list of character descriptions (albeit that one being very informative, too), since we can get a first glance at their behaviour as well.
A most welcome introduction to the tournament, which makes appetite for more.
But damn, this is tough. We are supposed to pick one favourite? One?! Uhhh...
There are quite a few which I would not mind to see come out on top in the end - or am particularly interested in to see them getting devoured.
Close to being my favourite are probably Pip and Angler, My Fisto and Mindy, and I really like what you did with Anvil.
However, even after those, there are so many more which I am really looking forward to see in action.
But my favourite champion will probably be... Spade.
I am usually not one for elves, most definitely not, but you made her so atypical and different from the noble, pretty and artistical fighters elves usually get stylised to be.
I will make sure to get a small group of animated garden gnomes and graveyard statues into the arena, holding grave candles as glimmers of hope for her victory. Cheering just does not seem appropriate in her case.
Posted by Sliptree13 7 years ago Report
Glad you liked it! Spade is definitely a fun one to write, since as you said she's the antithesis of a stereotypical elf. No glitz and glamour for her, just a shovel and the arm strength to swing it around. Utility over fashion.
Posted by MrQuarantine 7 years ago Report
Well done on the introductions. I really think you did a great job highlighting some characters, while leaving the mystery factor in others. My favorites still remain the same from last time, as I continue to find myself enamored by Angelr, Pip, Pebble and Mary. After reading this I did find myself naturally liking a few more than last time though because some personality was shown. Myfisto stuck out to me more and I really enjoyed the lore behind Munch. Personally the highlight of the story for me was Pebble's killer WWE style promo lol. I rather enjoyed how she stormed out there like a boss, took the mic, and basically said im here to whoop ass. I feel that character brought a lot of tension to the tournament and can't wait to see how it plays out. Pip doing squats while waiting btw was freaking adroable. Mary's personality was caught me off gaurd and I rather enjoyed the direction you chose to take it. I say this because I was half expecting her to be very stoic and gothic, but she actually seems to be a darker likeable character so kudos to you. Overall I think the ceremony was a success, I remain interested to see how things are going to turn out.
Posted by Sliptree13 7 years ago Report
I'm happy you feel the characters were highlighted well. One of my worries writing this thing, and the main reason it took so long to edit, was that there would be too many of them to really shine for the brief moments they got the spotlight. That's also why there's a bit more interaction between them after their introductions, otherwise they'd just sit there like dolls after they're paraded in. I had to do them justice before their fights and give readers a chance to see what their deal was before they began fighting to the death. Hence the many little headaches Hawk had to deal with for the sake of our amusement.