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Starting of an ongoing series I've been playing with in my head for awhile. While mild prep and cooking in this chapter, the series as a whole is meant to be for me having fun with cannibalistic cooking styles, as well as playing with Micros.
Come to think of it, micros feature a fair bit in later chapters, I just need my drive to update more.
Put under non-vore since I don't really know if this technically counts? Feel free to edit that if need be!
Heads up that feedback is always appreciated, and hope to entertain some of you out there. Please let me know if I've made any errors submitting and the likes
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Posted by oishi1 5 years ago Report
How does this not have a ton of comments? I greatly enjoy the way you write characters. It isn't heavy on vore content, but the things that are implied are excellent. You left a decent air of mystery.
Posted by Azane 5 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I hope to one day revisit this, a lot stories cooking away in my head... After I address and fix some things in the initial chapter anyway, looking back valley-girl bullies are a bit too cliche and a few other small things bother me- but there's a lot that's worth branching out I think :)
Posted by oishi1 5 years ago Report
Yeah. From a story perspective there is a lot that can be done with this.