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I decided to continue a path started on Chao's old "AnimeVore,GTS,GT,Shrink,Unbirth,AnalVore" interactive on Writing.com.

In this scenario, the world is reset and Shinji finds himself with a large appetite that can only be sated by the smorgasbord of fine female NERV employees. The first one to go is the redheaded, german terror.

My writing begins after the "---"
Everything before it is written by Chaos

You can find the scenario here if you wish to add to it yourself: https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1249098-AnimeVoreGTSGTShrinkUnbirthAnalVore/map/1551111

Feel free to explore and contribute to the interactive as a whole as well! It's been a longtime read of mine for years!

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theweirdone445: I'd love constructive criticism and explicit opinions on my works. I aim to improve and your feedback is very important to me.

Of course, any words of praise are appreciated too! :)

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Sharktooth98

Posted by Sharktooth98 7 years ago Report

great
id love it if you made a version where he decides not to digest her and uses something to hide her and just keeping her in his stomach for months not letting her die XD

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Flame14

Posted by Flame14 7 years ago Report

So you are "sunny" on writing.com. I'll have to keep an eye out for anything else you write.

Have to admit I think Asuka deserved this, though I'm curious as to what you plan to do with Rei. While Shinji could just eat her, it would be interesting if when he met with her she was also sporting a giant human filled stomach. The two of them could start a secret relationship based off of mutual respect for the others tastes in people. For example, Shinji could focus on eating females, while Rei might prefer the taste of males. The two of them together could completely wipe NERVE clean. It would also be kind of fitting for his father to be eaten by Rei and then have it rubbed in his face by his son.

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Chameleonette

Posted by Chameleonette 7 years ago Report

I enjoyed this! Nicely written. :) Thank you for adding to the woefully small amount of M/F stuff out there. And fatal, to boot!

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Kamelagram

Posted by Kamelagram 7 years ago Report

A fiendish male pred, I gotta say that that is rather rare. I love the work you put into this, will you be making more like this?

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groo456

Posted by groo456 7 years ago Report

Nice!! Not nearly enough fatal m/f around. You write whatever you're inspired to write, but I'd be lying if I said I'm not hoping that this is a recurring theme!

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Flatheaddog

Posted by Flatheaddog 7 years ago Report

Cant wait for more.

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Rorschav

Posted by Rorschav 3 years ago Report

This is the story that turned me on to male preds so good job!

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theweirdone445

Posted by theweirdone445 3 years ago Report

Glad to hear ;)

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