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This was a fun little thing I wrote, inspired by a couple of pictures I saw on the internet.

I love how exaggerated I wrote out Milky's digestion. I adore writing out how one character only eats like on person and then has an overproduction of semen. It's just so much fun.

Also a little bit of food transformation, but I don't think it really counts.

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boomer91

Posted by boomer91 3 years ago Report

I loved that mean old Mason invited his friend to his doom
But I'm a bit of a meany like that myself

Very cool :)

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MarinLaFey

Posted by MarinLaFey 3 years ago Report

Thank yous!

I meant for them to be work buddies but I forgot to write that in. I think it comes off that they're not best friends so I think it does the job no matter what.

I enjoy writing cruel sociopath preds though.

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ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 3 years ago Report

Oh goodness, this was great, start to finish. I was kinda hoping Mason would have become Milkyshakes instead, but hey, you shouldn't bite the hand that feeds your dick, right~?

I especially loved how Milky was still holding back with that orgasm. Well, I'm sure he'll get a volunteer to suck out the rest soon~

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MarinLaFey

Posted by MarinLaFey 3 years ago Report

Mason is a character that I enjoyed writing. His cool cocky attitude probably makes him deserved cock meal, but Milky likes him too much I think.

Oh yeah, I'm sure. the patrons. His brother. Someone who is willing to brave him.

Thanks for the comment!

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ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 3 years ago Report

Hopefully we'll get to see more of Milky in the future. Especially with how everyone loves to drink his cum afterwards - Not a drop wasted!

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MarinLaFey

Posted by MarinLaFey 3 years ago Report

Haha I'm not sure. It's a oneshot. Maybe I'll return to him. But I have a whole bunch of ideas.

I'm tempted. We'll see.

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ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 3 years ago Report

Well, all the same, I'm looking forward to more! ♥ This is the stuff that I love~

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zeek175

Posted by zeek175 3 years ago Report

This one definitely pushed some buttons for me. Instant fave.

Really loved the constant sexual pressure and cock worship that ran throughout the entire thing.
I love when cocks run down pant/short legs and end up perfectly visible.
It's always such a hot symbol that the cock is too much to be contained.
And it forces people to look at it, constantly reminds them that it's there.
The cock doesn't even have to be out for it to start dominating people.

And the cum eating was great too.
There's always something really cock worshippy about just full on eating someone's cum.
Making Kyle eat the cum before being made into cum himself was such a good touch.

And the ending bit where everyone gets to enjoy the benefits of the cock and it's kind of a happy ending, and they're all like a family, but they're all actually serving his cock too because it just shows that they lust after his seed and need his cock to eat people as much as he does.
And that's a thread that runs all the way through the story really. That sort of fetishization of Milky and his cock by everyone there.

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MarinLaFey

Posted by MarinLaFey 3 years ago Report

Oh wow thank you for the really thought out comment. Though I honestly didn't not intend for the fetishization of Milky to be a subtle running subject throughout. I just meant for this to be a cutesy one-shot.

However I must've written that entire idea in subconsciously, since there is this continuing idolization of Milky.

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zeek175

Posted by zeek175 3 years ago Report

Well, could be I just overthought it I guess. But I guess if you spot it too it must actually be something. :D

I did really enjoy the story though, and I love telling creators all the little ways their work appeals to me.

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Kooshmeister

Posted by Kooshmeister 3 years ago Report

This was incredibly sexy. Loved every moment of it.

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MarinLaFey

Posted by MarinLaFey 3 years ago Report

Thank yous.

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Kooshmeister

Posted by Kooshmeister 3 years ago Report

On the one hand, I feel kinda bad for Kyle, but, on the other, he went for a good cause. :)

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