Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report

This isn't a place for advertising things, please stop

Posted by SSJBura 7 years ago Report

Ooooh, this was a lot of fun! I like the idea of mixed magics working out in unconventional ways

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

It's a fun thing to consider.

Posted by corsper117 7 years ago Report

Man that was quite the read and I have to say, would we see more of this series? what Branka could do to her sisters potentially?

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

As always, late night, when I can't sleep, any of my stories could come back for a fresh entry.

Posted by Goblingobler 7 years ago Report

Reeeaally enjoyed this on, Marlow! Hope for more. :D

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by minasan 7 years ago Report

I really liked this one, compression/no bulge is definitely a favorite, and the magical explanation works nicely.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Yep, no bulge is a favorite of mine as well. HDTF was more or less created to justify it. And come to think of it, Fairy Magic too, in my stories.

Posted by minasan 7 years ago Report

I also like how you usually do non-lethal, it's just sexy fun with maybe a little powerplay.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Yep. Not a fan of fatal or permanent at all. Seems like we've got similar tastes.

Posted by no one 7 years ago Report

A sequel would be awesome my good sir!

Posted by Apostolos 7 years ago Report

Agreed, maybe going through the sisters one by one?

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Quite possible.

Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report

Ooh, fun, and something that seems like it could lead to all sorts of interesting scenes as Branka explores her limits.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Indeed. Cue me laying awake trying to think up fun "side effects" and uses.

Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 7 years ago Report

MMM fun little read and I agree with Groblek I'd love some sequels of her exploring her new limits (also wondering just what qualifies as a copyable 'trait').

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

That's the problem with writing these while only semi-lucid. I'm not ENTIRELY sure what I was going for there. Maybe some reference to her desire to duplicate the more impressive assets of her sisters.

Posted by BNCrazy 7 years ago Report

Ha Ha! You certainly know how to create a story no one wants to see end. I like the setting you created, it was almost pleasantly cliche, but as you always do, it turned unique. I like that you put nice little twists and surprises throughout it. The magic working the way it did was almost scientific how you made it work. Very fun to read. Switching the oral vore to unbirthing was entirely unexpected and I loved it. I got nothing but good things to say about this one. Nice work. I'm sorry about the insomnia, that's gotta be fixed, but truly nice work all the same. Thanks for letting us read it.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks! For the science-y take on science, you can blame the same author who has inspired most of my better ideas. There's a book called The Book of Deacon that features a magic system explained in similarly scientific ways.

Posted by BNCrazy 7 years ago Report

I may have to check this book out sometime. Not right now, though. I'm busy with all sorts of stuff. Everything ranging from filing claims on a car accident to searching for Colonial Marine costumes for an upcoming con. Gotta take the good with the bad, I guess. Again, great story. Hope you are feeling better. Insomnia is no joke!

Posted by RLord4268 7 years ago Report

I love the intersection of magic and squishiness. Makes everything kinkier.

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

I do love some squishiness.

Posted by ShadesofBlack 6 years ago Report

Love it, as usual!

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by TierHalibel11252 3 months ago Report

Me thinks this needs a a follow up if you javnt already