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Silly title is silly and punny.
Anyways this is a rewrite of an old fic. The original was on voreplay, and I've made a few changes, so if anyone has read the original, here are the changes I made.
- Marokia changed to Merok.
- Merok's speech and behavior has changed.
- Link originally at chu-chus ate the beginning. I changed it to the pond.
- Merok's magic has been dimmed down.
- Link's cock vore has changed. he originally only ate this random unfortunate passerby.I changed that to two goblins.
- The ending scene has changed. Instead of Link urethra fucking Merok, he unleashes his cum upon the forest while being fucked by Merok.
The original fic was also way, WAY, shorter. This clocks in at around 9.5k words. The original couldn't have been more than 3k at most.
Hope everyone enjoyed this writing, because I enjoyed rewriting it, despite a slight glitch in the programming. I had to rewrite the entire ending due to my computer overheating.
Posted by MarinLaFey 7 years ago Report
Poopies. I just realized I submitted this without indenting it.
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