The Midnight Wolf

Chapter 1: Prey
Part 1
Part 2
End

An unusual wolf pup in a forest of monstrous predators determines her place in the food chain.

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Canines do not cry when they are sad.
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So here is the final part of the first chapter. I hope everyone has enjoyed it thus far.

This part was a lot harder to write than I expected. I started this part thinking it would just be a little bit of post vore reflection. I got the idea of having the spider come back, and then decided to just give it a try and see how it went. After that, I sort of lost control of it. It was either forcing itself to be written, or going no-where, tanking every blow I threw at it.
I think it's turned out well, but I really can't tell anymore.

Even the vore in this part was hard, I had to write it from a spectator's perspective, and that really changes what you can do with the scene. I tried to make it still thoroughly enjoyable, and I'm hoping that I could make up for what the perspective and scene lacked, by focusing a lot on it and on vore in the character's thoughts. But then there's the trouble of balancing that with everything else, and it all gets very confusing to write.

If you have any advice in regards to that, or any comments you have on my writing, it would really help for the future.


Post vore is probably my favourite part of vore, (I say that, but my favorites are every part of vore) seeing how the predator and prey have affected each other, how they've changed. What the lasting effects are for one or both of them, depending on if it's fatal.

It's almost like a really strange kind of character development


I had a lot of 'fun' trying to describe the wolf/dragon predator, especially trying to describe its size. I'm interested to know if people think I handled it's description well, and also what people's general impressions were. I hope to get a lot more use out of this predator.

I've been toying with the idea of making a series of one-offs where people fall prey to the monsters in this story. It'll be fun to enjoy the preds fully, and to expand the world a little.


FYI, I will be avoiding any graphic disposal involving an underage pred. So until the wolf girl gets older, any disposal from her will just be implied.


The girl's name is still available for suggestions.

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