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“Hell Day”
by mZmm
 
 
  It was the day after Christmas. People were going back to work, shoveling the snow out of their driveways, returning to their previous lives...and returning presents. Mostly returning presents. The day had become well known in the retail scene as “Hell Day”, as swaths of customers descended upon the malls and superstores of the world, returning gifts unwanted, whether just plain wrong, in the wrong size, or wrong color, or what have you.
 
 
  It is here that Neil was forced to be today. Standing in a 50-person line at the local mall, line stretching out of the store into the main plaza, holding a small shoebox. Inside was a nice pair of shoes one of his friends had bought him. He assumed it was a joke, because shoes don’t really work with hooves, but he honestly couldn’t be sure about some of his friends sometimes.
 
 
  “Who even buys shoes for a deer…” Neil groaned as he stood in line, sometimes taking out his cellphone to just pass the time somehow. He had been here for at least a half hour at this point, and it seemed like it’d be at least another half hour before he would be able to return his item.
 
 
  None of these things were that terrible, though. What was terrible about this whole experience was the character currently in front of Neil in line. It was a shark, and he was being quite annoying, to put it lightly. Talking loudly on his cellphone, voicing his complaints about the wait in line quite...audibly, even getting in an argument with an employee of the store when they were walking by. He had been doing this to Neil for about an hour too, and Neil could tell that the rest of the patrons were quite fed up with it, including a wusky ahead of him in line.
 
 
  Since this shark was being quite audible about his problems, and throwing his name around, Neil had learned that his name was Aeko. He didn’t really want to know, but it made it easier whenever he decided to confront him.
 
 
  “Jesus christ, what the hell is taking so long!?” Aeko moaned as he messed around on his phone. “I swear, I’ve been here for days!” He audibly tapped his webbed foot on the floor, making almost a farce of his irritation.
 
 
  Neil’s eyebrows visibly furrowed. It was true that Aeko was voicing his own frustrations at the situation, but having them voiced didn’t help his frustration. In fact, they probably just made it more frustrating to wait in line. Various furs in the line had made cursory attempts at shutting the shark up, but he pretty much ignored all of them. Neil’s own patience had more than begun to thin at this point, and he thought about shutting up the shark himself...but he wasn’t quite at the tipping point yet.
 
 
  However, the wusky ahead of him seemed to be, because he was currently cursing the shark out.
 
 
  “What the hell is wrong with you, dude!?” Neil heard a voice come from ahead of him in the line. “Everyone here is already frustrated...why do you just have to make it worse!?” the wusky continued. Aeko seemed unfazed, casually (and loudly) carrying on a conversation on his phone while the wusky cursed him out, occasionally telling him to “fuck off, dude” or similar platitudes. He’d told plenty of people to fuck off today already, and it didn’t seem like he was stopping anytime soon.
 
 
  It was through this argument that Neil learned the wusky’s name was Adrian. The wusky quickly got tired of arguing with Aeko, not getting anywhere with the shark, opting to just turn around and try and tune out the shark...which wasn’t easy, when he was right behind him, and going back to loudly complaining, this time about the temperature in the mall.
 
 
  Neil’s eye twitched. He was about to snap at this guy. He wasn’t sure how he was gonna go about it, but he was gonna give Aeko a piece of his mind...and so he started, placing a hand on his shoulder.
 
 
  Aeko almost immediately turned around. “Dude, quit touching me!” he said, pushing the deer back a little, knocking him into the person behind him. Neil turned around to utter a quick “Sorry” to the person behind him before facing the shark again.
 
 
  “What’s your problem?” Neil demanded. “Why can’t you just shut up already? It’s not like you complaining is going to help anything!” he yelled, pushing back at the shark.
 
 
“Just fuck off, dude. I’ve got a lot of shit to do today.” Aeko said, turning back around and talking on his cellphone again. Neil tried to re-engage him but he shrugged off anything the deer would do - trying to turn him back around, yelling at him, whatever.
 
 
With Aeko ignoring every attempt the two made at trying to shut him up, things started to re-stabilize a little. The line moved forward somewhat, although it was still going to take forever at this point, and Aeko’s constant sound had almost become white noise to the deer. Neil started to browse his own phone a little, occasionally taking steps as the line moved forward. It seemed like the storm had passed.
 
 
...And then Neil saw another commotion unfold in front of him. It seemed Adrian had gotten tired of Aeko again, not having tuned out the shark yet, and was currently in the process of trying to knock some sense into him. The two were initially just arguing, but then it got physical.
 
 
Aeko initially punched Adrian, who pushed back, knocking the shark into Neil, who at this point didn’t really want to get involved. Then, Adrian grabbed Aeko, the wusky’s arms wrapping around Aeko as he threw him to the ground, Aeko hitting the mall floor with a dull thud as Adrian scrambled on top of his body.
 
 
Neil didn’t even know why they had started to fight, but it seemed like Adrian was clearly winning at this point...the two rolled around on the ground, trading blows back and forth, but Adrian always had some sort of leverage over Aeko. A crowd had started to form at this point, some people tired of waiting in line, other mall patrons, scrambling to get some sort of security people over here to break this up.
 
 
Meanwhile, Neil was...getting some ideas. He felt a bulge in his pants slowly rise as he saw the two scrambling on the ground...he had the perfect idea to get rid of this annoying shark once and for all. But it’d require a bit of help from the wusky, who currently was trying to pin Aeko down on the ground. He was on top of him, and had decent weight on the shark too, so he was winning pretty handily…
 
 
“Now maybe you’ll shut up.” the wusky said as he pinned down the shark, who squirmed under his grasp, trying to kick at the wusky as he held him down.
 
 
“D...dude, what the fuck!? Let me go! Somebody get this freak off me!” he yelled as the crowd watched. Most of them were totally fine with this, the shark having annoyed them as well. But Neil was going to take it a step further...he dropped his drawers, massaging at his bulge as he looked at Adrian. Their eyes meant, and they both knew exactly what Neil wanted to do to the shark.
 
 
Aeko was already pinned in a decent fashion to line himself up with Neil’s dick, which poked out as the deer dropped his underpants. The crowd watched in a mix of confusion and expectation as Neil moved closer to Aeko, whose head was awkwardly wiggling as the wusky pinned him down, not being able to see what was happening. He yelled some more obscenities at the wusky as Neil started to stroke at his cock, gently snaking out of his sheath, ready to wrap itself around the shark’s head…
 
 
“Oh, you’re gonna make a great load of cum, you annoying fuck...” Neil moaned as he felt his cock grow, the shaft eager to start slurping up the shark…Neil moved forward a bit, feeling his dick poke at the shark’s head before expanding around it, the shark’s ears forced down as the flesh wrapped around his head. With his eyes pointed down, Aeko couldn’t tell what was going on, but he didn’t like it, struggling anew as Adrian used all his strength to pin him down so that Neil could take him in.
 
 
The deer groaned as he felt his cock start to wrap around Aeko’s head, the struggling shark silenced as the cock flesh wrapped around his mouth, his vision being obscured by the pulsating walls as well...he yelled obscenities, trying to push against Adrian and Neil at the same time, but all those words did was vibrate further down into Neil’s shaft, causing the deer great pleasure as he felt the shark struggle. A hand hovered down to his length, massaging it and feeling around the bulge in it. Neil felt his orgasm already rising, and the shark wasn’t even halfway into him yet!
 
 
With a thrust and a bleat, though, Aeko was pulled deeper in, the cock wrapping around his shoulders. Adrian still had a grip on the shark’s chest, his hands starting to get pretty close to the cock slit themselves...but he started to loosen his grip a bit, Neil’s cock with more than enough leverage on Aeko to slurp him up entirely at this point.
 
 
Adrian did give a push before he loosened his grip, though, which lodged Aeko’s chest firmly inside of Neil, Adrian’s hands on the side of his chest as he pushed in. Neil wasn’t even looking at this point, head in the air, eyes closed as he lost himself in the pleasure, occasionally clenching a bit to pull the scrambling shark deeper inside of him, but it was mostly Adrian doing the work at this point. Neil felt his orgasm creeping up now, his heavy, sloshing balls begging to emptied...damn, he wished he’d fucked the shark before slurping him up. At this point, he’d have to hold out, try not to blow his load before the shark was even fully inside of him.
 
 
Adrian’s hands retreated a bit down Aeko’s body, staying clear of the ravenous cockslit, which continued to slurp down the shark, wet pre starting to dribble out of it now, betraying Neil’s arousal...the liquid splattered messily against the mall floor, a little pool of it starting to form around Neil’s feet as he moaned. He couldn’t hold it in anymore...those balls were going to burst if he didn’t cum at this moment. What would happen to Aeko wasn’t important at this point, he just needed release, NOW.
 
 
And, with a loud bleat, release came, Neil blowing hot loads that splattered right into Aeko’s face as he was pulled in by the clenching, his screaming, open mouth forced to gulp down most of the cum that Neil shot out, the shark’s belly bulging out a bit...although the tight walls around him forced his belly to flatten out somewhat, bulging against Neil’s cock oh-so-nicely. Neil could feel the individual bulges in the shark’s throat as he was forced to swallow down blast after blast of his cum, grinning a bit as he felt the shark’s belly bulge out, pressing up against his sensitive cock walls. The rest of the cum that Aeko didn’t end up gulping down ended up splattering past him, dribbling out of Neil’s cock and joining the pool of pre on the floor.
 
 
It was during this whole episode that Aeko was pulled even deeper, the clenches of Neil’s cock dragging him in even quicker, Adrian struggling to keep up with the rate he was going in...until Adrian’s own hands popped in with a lewd *shlrk*! The wusky tried to pull them out, but with Neil still in the middle of his orgasm, stroking at his cock as he felt his balls empty out, it was almost impossible to even move his hands in there. The cock was as tight as a vicegrip, and it was starting to pull in Adrian as well, the wusky quickly losing his ground and falling onto his belly, laying awkwardly on top of Aeko’s lower half.
 
 
“D..dude! Look down! Get a hold of yourself!” Adrian pleaded with Neil as he felt his arms being slurped deeper alongside Aeko’s body. He was still trying to pull them out, but with no leverage, it was nearly impossible. He could only look at his arms as they were being slurped in, occasionally glancing up to Neil, who was still in the throes of pleasure, head back and eyes closed, tongue hanging out as he stroked at his cock, feeling the delightful squirms of his two cockmeals as they ventured further into him. He thought he could hear Adrian saying something, but he was so far gone at this point that he didn’t care, just moaning weakly in response to Adrian’s pleas.
 
 
Occasionally, the wusky would venture a look to the crowd as well, who were frozen in what looked like abject horror, just watching the spectacle take place. Those who were concerned had long since fled, trying to find any sort of mall security force..and the line had long since been broken up as well. Pretty much everyone in the mall was currently watching this unfold, which would have unnerved Neil a bit if he currently wasn’t in another world right now, his cock finally ending off his orgasm, although he was still in an immense amount of pleasure, the struggles of Adrian and Aeko touching him so nicely…
 
 
Adrian’s head was now dangerously close to Neil’s cock now, the wusky reeling back as hard as he could as he pleaded with the deer to stop, but Neil’s body was in control now, and his body wanted his balls to be as full as possible...but eventually, Adrian couldn’t hold out, his position not lending itself very well to a struggle, and had to put his head down. The cock was already expanding up his neck even as he bent it back, and he felt like it would have snapped if he kept trying. Adrian struggled mightily as he felt the cock start to expand around his head, his world going dark, and his nose being filled with the dull, salty scent of deer cum as he was pulled deeper by a clench.
 
 
His head was firmly planted against Aeko’s lower back, the shark still struggling somewhat as his head started to empty out into Neil’s sac, the furry balls somewhat more spacious than Neil’s shaft. They were mostly empty as well, the deer having expelled all of his seed in that last orgasm (although most of it was currently gurgling in Aeko’s belly, the shark bulging with a bit of a paunch in his middle which was finally allowed to jiggle as he was clenched into the sac).
 
Neil bleated loudly as he felt the shark start to empty out into his balls, the sac being weighed down with Aeko’s squirming form. This was the best part for him; the feeling of a full, squirmy sac was simply unmatched, even better than a full belly in his opinion. He gave one last, full clench that pulled Aeko all the way into his shaft, Adrian coming along with him, the wusky being pulled in all the way to his chest as Aeko’s legs disappeared into Neil’s cock. Adrian was still trying to struggle, but it was pretty useless at this point, the wiggling sensation only serving to fuel Neil’s arousal. The deer clenched heartily against each struggle, only serving to quicken the process of slurping the two down.
 
 
Aeko was really starting to fill out Neil’s balls now, the deer’s legs wavering from the weight and pleasure, eventually forcing him to crash down onto the floor on his butt, cock poking out into the air, lifting up Adrian as well. The wusky struggled awkwardly as he felt his world shift, the wet shlucks of the cock starting to come more quickly now, aided by the presence of gravity. Neil moaned as Aeko’s body slid into his sac, the shark wiggling around inside as he tried to get comfortable. He still wasn’t 100 percent sure where he was, shouting obscenities at both Neil and Adrian as he pushed out against the walls, trying to work out where he ended up in - he knew he was inside of somebody, but he couldn’t tell exactly where, especially with the relative lack of cum in the deer’s balls not betraying his location.
 
 
Meanwhile, Adrian’s head was starting to empty out into the chamber, the wusky bumping against Aeko. He knew where he was, and he knew who was occupying the balls with him…
 
 
“Look what you did, asshole.” Adrian said as his head poked out into Neil’s balls.
 
 
“What I did!? You were the one who started fighting!” Aeko groaned as he tried to swat at the wusky’s head, failing to locate where the voice was coming from in the darkness. “Where the hell are we anyway!?”
 
 
“We’re inside that deer’s ballsac, dude.” Adrian groaned as he felt another clench push him out into the sac, his body sprawling over Aeko’s as the walls started to secrete a bit more cum. The watery fluid quickly got everywhere, coating the two in fresh deer cum as they struggled to find any room inside of the sac. It would have been moderately comfortable for just one person, but they were two full-sized adults, so space was going to be a bit more limited.
 
 
Neil, meanwhile, was still moaning as he felt his cock slit finally close around the last of Adrian, stroking at his cock to move the bulges down into his sac more quickly. He felt the last of Adrian slide out into his balls (although he still thought it was Aeko), and gave one last loud bleat as he felt those sloshy sacs fill up for good, his cock feeling nice and empty again. He reveled in the feeling of a full sac for a while before he finally opened his eyes, looking around to the crowd, panting as he felt his sac struggling.
 
 
Nothing happened for a good while. But then, the crowd slowly started cheering for him, glad that they were rid of that annoying shark...even though the method he may have used for it was a bit...odd.
 
 
Neil blushed a little as he waved at the crowd. “Ah...it was nothing…” he said as he looked at his squirming sac, still quite active, then to the crowd, then around the mall. “Oh, where’d that wusky go…” he said as he felt another kick in his balls. He looked into the crowd, trying to find him, then down to his squirming sac, which was quite bigger than what he thought it would be. Then he did the math…
 
 
“...Oh shit.” Neil said as he felt his sac kick again. He hadn’t even noticed the wusky disappear down there alongside Aeko. He felt bad about it, but at this point he was long past the point of saving. He was probably already churned up into deer cum in there, at least partially, waiting to be released…still, he felt a little bit of remorse about it.
 
 
Inside the sac, though, the two weren’t quite churned yet. While they were both getting tingly, and there started to be more and more cum filling in the empty space between the two (which was gradually getting larger), Aeko was still having a panic attack. He continually pushed out against the sac walls, trying to free himself somehow, but with their stretchiness, all he was doing was making rather macabre handprints on the outside of Neil’s sac.
 
 
“What the fuck? How did I end up in here!?” Aeko shouted, his mouth filling with hot cum as he did so, causing the shark to gag a little as he felt his already-swollen belly fill out a bit more with it. “Agh, what the hell is happening? What did I do to deserve this!?” he yelled.
 
 
“You were annoying.” Adrian calmly commented, probably squished underneath Aeko’s thigh or something, some sort of pressure squishing him against the sac walls. “And now you’re going to be cum. And so am I, and there’s nothing you can do about it, so you might as well quit struggling.”
 
 
Aeko ignored Adrian at this point, trying to push out against Neil’s sac as best as he could. The only real feedback he got was the occasional deep moan from the deer, which rumbled throughout the sac, almost threatening in a way. But eventually he’d run out of energy...or balance, as Neil started to slowly get up, dragging his heavy ballsac as he struggled to put his clothes back on...eventually just giving up, wadding them up and putting them underneath his arm as he dragged his way out of the mall, occasionally panting as he felt Aeko or Adrian kick out against his sac.
 
 
Luckily, his car was just outside the mall, otherwise dragging that sac against the concrete would be hell...Neil unlocked it and stepped in, heaving his still-squirming sac underneath the steering wheel, the bloated balls landing with a dull thump that rattled Aeko and Adrian around inside.
 
 
Well, what was left of them at this point. Aeko had more than tired himself out now, panting as he felt his body tingle even more, parts of him starting to melt away in the sloshy cum sea. Adrian had just been watching Aeko’s whole spectacle, not even really paying attention to his whole body melting down...although Aeko was farther along than he was, the sloshing cum in the sac mostly comprised of shark at this point. Steadily, though, wusky was starting to add to it…
 
 
Neil groaned as he felt his sac start to clench somewhat, really constricting the two in there (or what was left of them), their bodies gradually starting to melt down into cum. “Agh...you two are gonna make a fantastic load of deer jizz…” he said as he rubbed at his sac somewhat, as well as some passing strokes at his cock, driving with one hand as he turned the corner into his neighborhood.
 
 
The environment inside of the deer sac was becoming a lot more caustic now. Aeko had more or less entirely churned up now, leaving Adrian starting to drown in a sea of deer jizz, the cream already up to his nose as he tried to fight against it...but there really was no use at this point. Most of his body had already been churned up as well, it was really only his consciousness floating around inside now...and even that was starting to fade as well, Adrian closing his eyes and starting to drift away into the ether…
Neil heard a loud, wet gurgle from his sac as he pulled into the driveway. From experience, he knew this meant that the two inside were gone, converted into nothing but orgasm fuel for the deer. He looked down to his sac, still quite swollen, but not bulging out like it was before, and finally suspended from the ground, at least somewhat...still, they sloshed around needily, waiting for release as Neil got out of the car, nearly sprinting to his door. He needed release right now, and he also wanted to fill himself up a little too...he unlocked the door and sprinted upstairs to his bedroom, one hand underneath supporting his swaying ballsac as he sat on the end of his bed, flopping back as he moaned, finally able to really enjoy himself.
 
 
He took one hand to stroke at his length, already quite aroused already, and only poking up more as he rubbed at it, soon reaching its max length. He couldn’t really even moan, just fondling at his balls as he felt the cum inside slosh around, waiting to be released...but he’d take this time. He wished that he could still feel the two struggling inside, but alas, that wasn’t true (although he did jerk himself a bit off in the car, which felt absolutely divine). He’d have to take what he could get, though, and what he got was a heavy, sloshing sac, begging to be emptied.
 
 
Neil’s tongue hung out of his mouth as he laid back on his bed, thinking about how nice he’d feel with a sloshing belly full of cum...that thought alone was enough to drive him into a frenzy, taking two hands to his dick and pumping up and down as he reared his head up, mouth open as he edged as close to his cock as he possibly could, making sure he’d get as much down as was possible…
 
 
And then, the orgasm came. Gooey spurts of deer jizz slapped against Neil’s face and into his mouth, the deer eagerly gulping them down as they came, dribbles of it running down his chin as he held his mouth open. It tasted a little odd, but nothing too unpalatable. He could already see his stomach bulging out just a tad, taking a hand to rub at it as he continued to orgasm, gulping down more and more shots of jizz.
 
 
He could barely even sit up at this point, the pleasure causing him to slowly fall back onto the bed as his cock continued to spurt out the seed, his sac slowly shrinking back to normal size as it emptied. The spurts of seed continued to land on Neil’s face and in his open mouth, the deer occasionally licking at his face to catch whatever he missed...he was still stroking at his cock with one hand, but eventually the orgasm came to an end, and that hand came to rest against the bed, Neil slowly panting as he felt his orgasm finally die down.
 
 
He closed his eyes for a while, basking in the post-orgasm bliss before he opened them to take a look. He hadn’t gotten much jizz on his bed, but his chest was absolutely covered in strands of it, not to mention his jiggling belly, which bulged out slightly as the cum inside sloshed around.
 
 
“Well, shit. How am I gonna clean all this up…” Neil said as he slowly tried to get up. It’s at that point that he remembered he didn’t even return the gift he was going to! Well, there was always tomorrow. Maybe he’d run into another snack, or even better, another load...
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[originally uploaded to FA on Feb 1st, 2017]

Commission for Shinar! Featuring Neil slurping up his characters Aeko and Adrian. Don't buy a deer shoes, people.

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It was the day after Christmas. People were going back to work, shoveling the snow out of their driveways, returning to their previous lives...and returning presents. Mostly returning presents. The day had become well known in the retail scene as “Hell Day”, as swaths of customers descended upon the malls and superstores of the world, returning gifts unwanted, whether just plain wrong, in the wrong size, or wrong color, or what have you.

It is here that Neil was forced to be today. Standing in a 50-person line at the local mall, line stretching out of the store into the main plaza, holding a small shoebox. Inside was a nice pair of shoes one of his friends had bought him. He assumed it was a joke, because shoes don’t really work with hooves, but he honestly couldn’t be sure about some of his friends sometimes.

“Who even buys shoes for a deer…” Neil groaned as he stood in line, sometimes taking out his cellphone to just pass the time somehow. He had been here for at least a half hour at this point, and it seemed like it’d be at least another half hour before he would be able to return his item.

None of these things were that terrible, though. What was terrible about this whole experience was the character currently in front of Neil in line. It was a shark, and he was being quite annoying, to put it lightly. Talking loudly on his cellphone, voicing his complaints about the wait in line quite...audibly, even getting in an argument with an employee of the store when they were walking by. He had been doing this to Neil for about an hour too, and Neil could tell that the rest of the patrons were quite fed up with it, including a wusky ahead of him in line.

Since this shark was being quite audible about his problems, and throwing his name around, Neil had learned that his name was Aeko. He didn’t really want to know, but it made it easier whenever he decided to confront him.

“Jesus christ, what the hell is taking so long!?” Aeko moaned as he messed around on his phone. “I swear, I’ve been here for days!” He audibly tapped his webbed foot on the floor, making almost a farce of his irritation.

Neil’s eyebrows visibly furrowed. It was true that Aeko was voicing his own frustrations at the situation, but having them voiced didn’t help his frustration. In fact, they probably just made it more frustrating to wait in line. Various furs in the line had made cursory attempts at shutting the shark up, but he pretty much ignored all of them. Neil’s own patience had more than begun to thin at this point, and he thought about shutting up the shark himself...but he wasn’t quite at the tipping point yet.

However, the wusky ahead of him seemed to be, because he was currently cursing the shark out.

“What the hell is wrong with you, dude!?” Neil heard a voice come from ahead of him in the line. “Everyone here is already frustrated...why do you just have to make it worse!?” the wusky continued. Aeko seemed unfazed, casually (and loudly) carrying on a conversation on his phone while the wusky cursed him out, occasionally telling him to “fuck off, dude” or similar platitudes. He’d told plenty of people to fuck off today already, and it didn’t seem like he was stopping anytime soon.

It was through this argument that Neil learned the wusky’s name was Adrian. The wusky quickly got tired of arguing with Aeko, not getting anywhere with the shark, opting to just turn around and try and tune out the shark...which wasn’t easy, when he was right behind him, and going back to loudly complaining, this time about the temperature in the mall.

Neil’s eye twitched. He was about to snap at this guy. He wasn’t sure how he was gonna go about it, but he was gonna give Aeko a piece of his mind...and so he started, placing a hand on his shoulder.

Aeko almost immediately turned around. “Dude, quit touching me!” he said, pushing the deer back a little, knocking him into the person behind him. Neil turned around to utter a quick “Sorry” to the person behind him before facing the shark again.

“What’s your problem?” Neil demanded. “Why can’t you just shut up already? It’s not like you complaining is going to help anything!” he yelled, pushing back at the shark.

“Just fuck off, dude. I’ve got a lot of shit to do today.” Aeko said, turning back around and talking on his cellphone again. Neil tried to re-engage him but he shrugged off anything the deer would do - trying to turn him back around, yelling at him, whatever.

With Aeko ignoring every attempt the two made at trying to shut him up, things started to re-stabilize a little. The line moved forward somewhat, although it was still going to take forever at this point, and Aeko’s constant sound had almost become white noise to the deer. Neil started to browse his own phone a little, occasionally taking steps as the line moved forward. It seemed like the storm had passed.

...And then Neil saw another commotion unfold in front of him. It seemed Adrian had gotten tired of Aeko again, not having tuned out the shark yet, and was currently in the process of trying to knock some sense into him. The two were initially just arguing, but then it got physical.

Aeko initially punched Adrian, who pushed back, knocking the shark into Neil, who at this point didn’t really want to get involved. Then, Adrian grabbed Aeko, the wusky’s arms wrapping around Aeko as he threw him to the ground, Aeko hitting the mall floor with a dull thud as Adrian scrambled on top of his body.

Neil didn’t even know why they had started to fight, but it seemed like Adrian was clearly winning at this point...the two rolled around on the ground, trading blows back and forth, but Adrian always had some sort of leverage over Aeko. A crowd had started to form at this point, some people tired of waiting in line, other mall patrons, scrambling to get some sort of security people over here to break this up.

Meanwhile, Neil was...getting some ideas. He felt a bulge in his pants slowly rise as he saw the two scrambling on the ground...he had the perfect idea to get rid of this annoying shark once and for all. But it’d require a bit of help from the wusky, who currently was trying to pin Aeko down on the ground. He was on top of him, and had decent weight on the shark too, so he was winning pretty handily…

“Now maybe you’ll shut up.” the wusky said as he pinned down the shark, who squirmed under his grasp, trying to kick at the wusky as he held him down.

“D...dude, what the fuck!? Let me go! Somebody get this freak off me!” he yelled as the crowd watched. Most of them were totally fine with this, the shark having annoyed them as well. But Neil was going to take it a step further...he dropped his drawers, massaging at his bulge as he looked at Adrian. Their eyes meant, and they both knew exactly what Neil wanted to do to the shark.

Aeko was already pinned in a decent fashion to line himself up with Neil’s dick, which poked out as the deer dropped his underpants. The crowd watched in a mix of confusion and expectation as Neil moved closer to Aeko, whose head was awkwardly wiggling as the wusky pinned him down, not being able to see what was happening. He yelled some more obscenities at the wusky as Neil started to stroke at his cock, gently snaking out of his sheath, ready to wrap itself around the shark’s head…

“Oh, you’re gonna make a great load of cum, you annoying fuck...” Neil moaned as he felt his cock grow, the shaft eager to start slurping up the shark…Neil moved forward a bit, feeling his dick poke at the shark’s head before expanding around it, the shark’s ears forced down as the flesh wrapped around his head. With his eyes pointed down, Aeko couldn’t tell what was going on, but he didn’t like it, struggling anew as Adrian used all his strength to pin him down so that Neil could take him in.

The deer groaned as he felt his cock start to wrap around Aeko’s head, the struggling shark silenced as the cock flesh wrapped around his mouth, his vision being obscured by the pulsating walls as well...he yelled obscenities, trying to push against Adrian and Neil at the same time, but all those words did was vibrate further down into Neil’s shaft, causing the deer great pleasure as he felt the shark struggle. A hand hovered down to his length, massaging it and feeling around the bulge in it. Neil felt his orgasm already rising, and the shark wasn’t even halfway into him yet!

With a thrust and a bleat, though, Aeko was pulled deeper in, the cock wrapping around his shoulders. Adrian still had a grip on the shark’s chest, his hands starting to get pretty close to the cock slit themselves...but he started to loosen his grip a bit, Neil’s cock with more than enough leverage on Aeko to slurp him up entirely at this point.

Adrian did give a push before he loosened his grip, though, which lodged Aeko’s chest firmly inside of Neil, Adrian’s hands on the side of his chest as he pushed in. Neil wasn’t even looking at this point, head in the air, eyes closed as he lost himself in the pleasure, occasionally clenching a bit to pull the scrambling shark deeper inside of him, but it was mostly Adrian doing the work at this point. Neil felt his orgasm creeping up now, his heavy, sloshing balls begging to emptied...damn, he wished he’d fucked the shark before slurping him up. At this point, he’d have to hold out, try not to blow his load before the shark was even fully inside of him.

Adrian’s hands retreated a bit down Aeko’s body, staying clear of the ravenous cockslit, which continued to slurp down the shark, wet pre starting to dribble out of it now, betraying Neil’s arousal...the liquid splattered messily against the mall floor, a little pool of it starting to form around Neil’s feet as he moaned. He couldn’t hold it in anymore...those balls were going to burst if he didn’t cum at this moment. What would happen to Aeko wasn’t important at this point, he just needed release, NOW.

And, with a loud bleat, release came, Neil blowing hot loads that splattered right into Aeko’s face as he was pulled in by the clenching, his screaming, open mouth forced to gulp down most of the cum that Neil shot out, the shark’s belly bulging out a bit...although the tight walls around him forced his belly to flatten out somewhat, bulging against Neil’s cock oh-so-nicely. Neil could feel the individual bulges in the shark’s throat as he was forced to swallow down blast after blast of his cum, grinning a bit as he felt the shark’s belly bulge out, pressing up against his sensitive cock walls. The rest of the cum that Aeko didn’t end up gulping down ended up splattering past him, dribbling out of Neil’s cock and joining the pool of pre on the floor.

It was during this whole episode that Aeko was pulled even deeper, the clenches of Neil’s cock dragging him in even quicker, Adrian struggling to keep up with the rate he was going in...until Adrian’s own hands popped in with a lewd *shlrk*! The wusky tried to pull them out, but with Neil still in the middle of his orgasm, stroking at his cock as he felt his balls empty out, it was almost impossible to even move his hands in there. The cock was as tight as a vicegrip, and it was starting to pull in Adrian as well, the wusky quickly losing his ground and falling onto his belly, laying awkwardly on top of Aeko’s lower half.

“D..dude! Look down! Get a hold of yourself!” Adrian pleaded with Neil as he felt his arms being slurped deeper alongside Aeko’s body. He was still trying to pull them out, but with no leverage, it was nearly impossible. He could only look at his arms as they were being slurped in, occasionally glancing up to Neil, who was still in the throes of pleasure, head back and eyes closed, tongue hanging out as he stroked at his cock, feeling the delightful squirms of his two cockmeals as they ventured further into him. He thought he could hear Adrian saying something, but he was so far gone at this point that he didn’t care, just moaning weakly in response to Adrian’s pleas.

Occasionally, the wusky would venture a look to the crowd as well, who were frozen in what looked like abject horror, just watching the spectacle take place. Those who were concerned had long since fled, trying to find any sort of mall security force..and the line had long since been broken up as well. Pretty much everyone in the mall was currently watching this unfold, which would have unnerved Neil a bit if he currently wasn’t in another world right now, his cock finally ending off his orgasm, although he was still in an immense amount of pleasure, the struggles of Adrian and Aeko touching him so nicely…

Adrian’s head was now dangerously close to Neil’s cock now, the wusky reeling back as hard as he could as he pleaded with the deer to stop, but Neil’s body was in control now, and his body wanted his balls to be as full as possible...but eventually, Adrian couldn’t hold out, his position not lending itself very well to a struggle, and had to put his head down. The cock was already expanding up his neck even as he bent it back, and he felt like it would have snapped if he kept trying. Adrian struggled mightily as he felt the cock start to expand around his head, his world going dark, and his nose being filled with the dull, salty scent of deer cum as he was pulled deeper by a clench.

His head was firmly planted against Aeko’s lower back, the shark still struggling somewhat as his head started to empty out into Neil’s sac, the furry balls somewhat more spacious than Neil’s shaft. They were mostly empty as well, the deer having expelled all of his seed in that last orgasm (although most of it was currently gurgling in Aeko’s belly, the shark bulging with a bit of a paunch in his middle which was finally allowed to jiggle as he was clenched into the sac).

Neil bleated loudly as he felt the shark start to empty out into his balls, the sac being weighed down with Aeko’s squirming form. This was the best part for him; the feeling of a full, squirmy sac was simply unmatched, even better than a full belly in his opinion. He gave one last, full clench that pulled Aeko all the way into his shaft, Adrian coming along with him, the wusky being pulled in all the way to his chest as Aeko’s legs disappeared into Neil’s cock. Adrian was still trying to struggle, but it was pretty useless at this point, the wiggling sensation only serving to fuel Neil’s arousal. The deer clenched heartily against each struggle, only serving to quicken the process of slurping the two down.

Aeko was really starting to fill out Neil’s balls now, the deer’s legs wavering from the weight and pleasure, eventually forcing him to crash down onto the floor on his butt, cock poking out into the air, lifting up Adrian as well. The wusky struggled awkwardly as he felt his world shift, the wet shlucks of the cock starting to come more quickly now, aided by the presence of gravity. Neil moaned as Aeko’s body slid into his sac, the shark wiggling around inside as he tried to get comfortable. He still wasn’t 100 percent sure where he was, shouting obscenities at both Neil and Adrian as he pushed out against the walls, trying to work out where he ended up in - he knew he was inside of somebody, but he couldn’t tell exactly where, especially with the relative lack of cum in the deer’s balls not betraying his location.

Meanwhile, Adrian’s head was starting to empty out into the chamber, the wusky bumping against Aeko. He knew where he was, and he knew who was occupying the balls with him…

“Look what you did, asshole.” Adrian said as his head poked out into Neil’s balls.

“What I did!? You were the one who started fighting!” Aeko groaned as he tried to swat at the wusky’s head, failing to locate where the voice was coming from in the darkness. “Where the hell are we anyway!?”

“We’re inside that deer’s ballsac, dude.” Adrian groaned as he felt another clench push him out into the sac, his body sprawling over Aeko’s as the walls started to secrete a bit more cum. The watery fluid quickly got everywhere, coating the two in fresh deer cum as they struggled to find any room inside of the sac. It would have been moderately comfortable for just one person, but they were two full-sized adults, so space was going to be a bit more limited.

Neil, meanwhile, was still moaning as he felt his cock slit finally close around the last of Adrian, stroking at his cock to move the bulges down into his sac more quickly. He felt the last of Adrian slide out into his balls (although he still thought it was Aeko), and gave one last loud bleat as he felt those sloshy sacs fill up for good, his cock feeling nice and empty again. He reveled in the feeling of a full sac for a while before he finally opened his eyes, looking around to the crowd, panting as he felt his sac struggling.

Nothing happened for a good while. But then, the crowd slowly started cheering for him, glad that they were rid of that annoying shark...even though the method he may have used for it was a bit...odd.

Neil blushed a little as he waved at the crowd. “Ah...it was nothing…” he said as he looked at his squirming sac, still quite active, then to the crowd, then around the mall. “Oh, where’d that wusky go…” he said as he felt another kick in his balls. He looked into the crowd, trying to find him, then down to his squirming sac, which was quite bigger than what he thought it would be. Then he did the math…

“...Oh shit.” Neil said as he felt his sac kick again. He hadn’t even noticed the wusky disappear down there alongside Aeko. He felt bad about it, but at this point he was long past the point of saving. He was probably already churned up into deer cum in there, at least partially, waiting to be released…still, he felt a little bit of remorse about it.

Inside the sac, though, the two weren’t quite churned yet. While they were both getting tingly, and there started to be more and more cum filling in the empty space between the two (which was gradually getting larger), Aeko was still having a panic attack. He continually pushed out against the sac walls, trying to free himself somehow, but with their stretchiness, all he was doing was making rather macabre handprints on the outside of Neil’s sac.

“What the fuck? How did I end up in here!?” Aeko shouted, his mouth filling with hot cum as he did so, causing the shark to gag a little as he felt his already-swollen belly fill out a bit more with it. “Agh, what the hell is happening? What did I do to deserve this!?” he yelled.

“You were annoying.” Adrian calmly commented, probably squished underneath Aeko’s thigh or something, some sort of pressure squishing him against the sac walls. “And now you’re going to be cum. And so am I, and there’s nothing you can do about it, so you might as well quit struggling.”

Aeko ignored Adrian at this point, trying to push out against Neil’s sac as best as he could. The only real feedback he got was the occasional deep moan from the deer, which rumbled throughout the sac, almost threatening in a way. But eventually he’d run out of energy...or balance, as Neil started to slowly get up, dragging his heavy ballsac as he struggled to put his clothes back on...eventually just giving up, wadding them up and putting them underneath his arm as he dragged his way out of the mall, occasionally panting as he felt Aeko or Adrian kick out against his sac.

Luckily, his car was just outside the mall, otherwise dragging that sac against the concrete would be hell...Neil unlocked it and stepped in, heaving his still-squirming sac underneath the steering wheel, the bloated balls landing with a dull thump that rattled Aeko and Adrian around inside.

Well, what was left of them at this point. Aeko had more than tired himself out now, panting as he felt his body tingle even more, parts of him starting to melt away in the sloshy cum sea. Adrian had just been watching Aeko’s whole spectacle, not even really paying attention to his whole body melting down...although Aeko was farther along than he was, the sloshing cum in the sac mostly comprised of shark at this point. Steadily, though, wusky was starting to add to it…

Neil groaned as he felt his sac start to clench somewhat, really constricting the two in there (or what was left of them), their bodies gradually starting to melt down into cum. “Agh...you two are gonna make a fantastic load of deer jizz…” he said as he rubbed at his sac somewhat, as well as some passing strokes at his cock, driving with one hand as he turned the corner into his neighborhood.

The environment inside of the deer sac was becoming a lot more caustic now. Aeko had more or less entirely churned up now, leaving Adrian starting to drown in a sea of deer jizz, the cream already up to his nose as he tried to fight against it...but there really was no use at this point. Most of his body had already been churned up as well, it was really only his consciousness floating around inside now...and even that was starting to fade as well, Adrian closing his eyes and starting to drift away into the ether…
Neil heard a loud, wet gurgle from his sac as he pulled into the driveway. From experience, he knew this meant that the two inside were gone, converted into nothing but orgasm fuel for the deer. He looked down to his sac, still quite swollen, but not bulging out like it was before, and finally suspended from the ground, at least somewhat...still, they sloshed around needily, waiting for release as Neil got out of the car, nearly sprinting to his door. He needed release right now, and he also wanted to fill himself up a little too...he unlocked the door and sprinted upstairs to his bedroom, one hand underneath supporting his swaying ballsac as he sat on the end of his bed, flopping back as he moaned, finally able to really enjoy himself.

He took one hand to stroke at his length, already quite aroused already, and only poking up more as he rubbed at it, soon reaching its max length. He couldn’t really even moan, just fondling at his balls as he felt the cum inside slosh around, waiting to be released...but he’d take this time. He wished that he could still feel the two struggling inside, but alas, that wasn’t true (although he did jerk himself a bit off in the car, which felt absolutely divine). He’d have to take what he could get, though, and what he got was a heavy, sloshing sac, begging to be emptied.

Neil’s tongue hung out of his mouth as he laid back on his bed, thinking about how nice he’d feel with a sloshing belly full of cum...that thought alone was enough to drive him into a frenzy, taking two hands to his dick and pumping up and down as he reared his head up, mouth open as he edged as close to his cock as he possibly could, making sure he’d get as much down as was possible…

And then, the orgasm came. Gooey spurts of deer jizz slapped against Neil’s face and into his mouth, the deer eagerly gulping them down as they came, dribbles of it running down his chin as he held his mouth open. It tasted a little odd, but nothing too unpalatable. He could already see his stomach bulging out just a tad, taking a hand to rub at it as he continued to orgasm, gulping down more and more shots of jizz.

He could barely even sit up at this point, the pleasure causing him to slowly fall back onto the bed as his cock continued to spurt out the seed, his sac slowly shrinking back to normal size as it emptied. The spurts of seed continued to land on Neil’s face and in his open mouth, the deer occasionally licking at his face to catch whatever he missed...he was still stroking at his cock with one hand, but eventually the orgasm came to an end, and that hand came to rest against the bed, Neil slowly panting as he felt his orgasm finally die down.

He closed his eyes for a while, basking in the post-orgasm bliss before he opened them to take a look. He hadn’t gotten much jizz on his bed, but his chest was absolutely covered in strands of it, not to mention his jiggling belly, which bulged out slightly as the cum inside sloshed around.

“Well, shit. How am I gonna clean all this up…” Neil said as he slowly tried to get up. It’s at that point that he remembered he didn’t even return the gift he was going to! Well, there was always tomorrow. Maybe he’d run into another snack, or even better, another load...

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darc22005

Posted by darc22005 8 months ago

Why do you have the story in description and in the story spot itsself ?

mZmm

Posted by mZmm 8 months ago

in case it doesnt display the .txt - happens to some people

darc22005

Posted by darc22005 8 months ago

Ahh thinking ahead, very nice

Boonythewolf

Posted by Boonythewolf 8 months ago

Yer cock vore stories are awesome.