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Chapter one of a very, very long-standing commission by Uri. Tells the tale of a family that finds itself unable to avoid the vorish world around it.

I know it's been a long time. Hopefully there will be a much shorter gap between now and my next posting. Got a bit more graphic than usual in the digestion scene; I don't really have anything this extreme planned for the future, but if people are interested, maybe that might change.
Please let me know what you think; if you have any questions for me about stories, commission status, or the state of the world, I will be doing my best to respond promptly to both PMs and comments.

Stay tasty everyone :)

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Marrickmiddler

Posted by Marrickmiddler 7 years ago Report

Some morbid impulse drives me to check your updates, even though I know I'm not actually going to enjoy anything. Probably the angry moralist inside me blocking out all arousal and wanting to be fed with more delicious emotional outrage, but anyway I don't react in the - ah - intended fashion.

This one is actually a nice change of pace - mostly thanks to the male vore. And unlike your other commissions (plus Linda...), it's actually close to Freaky Plants in terms of skill and composition quality. This one feels more.. verbose, focused. You're near the top of your previous game, so at least I have some pretty prose to look at. Keep at it!

(Also, I saw that blog post and count myself rather *un*lucky that my college is on strike right now. Losing so much time...)

Eater99

Posted by Eater99 7 years ago Report

Sorry to hear about the college thing; sounds even worse than my situation. At least I just have to deal with the problems I brought on myself.

I'm honestly not sure how to respond to your comment. I'm quite glad you enjoyed one of my stories again after being repulsed by so many of them. However, I'm really not sure what I did so differently with this one as compared to my others, with the exception of it having male vore in it.
I hope I continue to make things you enjoy again, but at the same time I don't want to get your hopes too high, especially since, when all is said and done, I enjoy a lot of different perspectives on vore, depending on my mood, and some of the things I enjoy are ones that you've expressed extreme and entirely justified distaste for. I know I would like to have more stories out like additional Freaky Plants installments, but I also know I'm going to be publishing ones more akin to the Linda piece as well.

If you ever get sick of trawling through the stories in my gallery that disturb you but still want to keep an eye out for ones you'd like, I could try to help you with that. If you could try or pin down some key traits that are major turn-ons and turn-offs, I could make a point of contacting you when I publish a story that I think you'd like and steer you away from the more twisted ones

And please don't be afraid to let me know if and how one of my stories (or pictures, for that matter) bugs you. I can take the criticism, and I do find it informative and helpful to see the thoughts of someone who straight-up dislikes something I made.