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Here we go, finally uploading my second story!
This is probably the longest thing I have written for recreation before, and I hope you guys enjoy it. This also marks the first time I've attempted to write any sort of sex scene, and I think it turned out all right.
In terms of length, I think that it might be a bit much. I was worried that there was a bit too much lead up to the actual feeding and sexy bits, so I would really like to hear what you guys thought about the length of the beginning and the story as a whole.
Please feel free send me some feedback! I would love to hear what you think about the story, and anything that you think I could improve or that I did well.
Thank you for reading!
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Posted by SonOfDarkness 6 years ago Report
muh dick!
Really though, that was incredible.