Apologies for the nit picking, but in frame 2 Melissa's legs look a bit off. Not being an artist, I couldn't tell you how to draw it better other than 'add a crotch'. Legs look weird when they just meet together, because on humans they dont. On bird people, however, I'm not too sure... Other than that, it looks great!
If feedback is fantastic I hope you're not full~, I personally find it all mostly fantastic, maybe a few tiny things feel off but it's nothing serious~
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report
A stuffed meal is much more filling :3
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
2 is always better than 1 ;)
Posted by Royal_Starlord 6 years ago Report
Noice. :///3
Posted by Novalori 6 years ago Report
skunks are always fun. Also always loved the whole "food dosn't talk" teasing thing..great job :)
Posted by HisashiHinata 6 years ago Report
Those pink feet...
Please tell me that's who I think it is. 0w0
Posted by Portal124 6 years ago Report
It is~
Posted by RavenXeo 6 years ago Report
that last panel is pretty<3
Posted by welp 6 years ago Report
Apologies for the nit picking, but in frame 2 Melissa's legs look a bit off. Not being an artist, I couldn't tell you how to draw it better other than 'add a crotch'. Legs look weird when they just meet together, because on humans they dont. On bird people, however, I'm not too sure... Other than that, it looks great!
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
whops! that is an actual error! good eye on that!! my bad, didn't see that :/
Posted by AnimaRibelle 6 years ago Report
Il tuo primo fumetto? :D
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
No! Anche se preferisco fare illustrazioni a 1 pagina,molto sul classico. Ho un altro fumetto che ho caricato poco tempo fa, vai a guardarlo!
Posted by AnimaRibelle 6 years ago Report
Ah si lo avevo già visto! XD
Comunque sono sempre belli ^^
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
Grazie ^///^ Devo imparare a disegnare degli sfondi, faccio abbastanza schifo a disegnarli
Posted by AnimaRibelle 6 years ago Report
Eeeeh guarda questa è la fila se ti interessa...
ma sopratutto per i fumetti ^^''
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
vero che sono impestatissimi? caz** mi sono visto milioni di tutorial su youtube ma faccio caga** lo stesso ahahahhahahha
Posted by AnimaRibelle 6 years ago Report
beh io vado al principio, ma il mio problema è che dò troppi colori accesi XD
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
io invece non riesco a schiodarmi dai soliti uso sempre colori caldi
Posted by AnimaRibelle 6 years ago Report
dobbiamo imparare tutti e due ^^
Ma col tempo ce la facciamo ^^
Posted by Manofthehouse 6 years ago Report
If feedback is fantastic I hope you're not full~, I personally find it all mostly fantastic, maybe a few tiny things feel off but it's nothing serious~