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Does the employee health plan cover Post-Devourment Stress Disorder?
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Writing has been slow. I blame my brain -- it can't seem to focus when I actually have time to spare.

It's been far too long since I've posted anything at all, so here's half of the next chapter. No vore in this bit, though it does have some of my absolute favorite character moments.

*update* Instead of splitting Chapters 5A and 5B (originally done because I hate waiting to finish stuff before posting), I think instead I'll make this installment plain ole' 5, with Chapter 6 due any day now.

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PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report

This was, as per usual from you, excellent reading. Despite the lack of kink material, this was entertaining and well-paced from start to finish.

I quite enjoyed the bits with the somewhat eccentric Director Corley, not to mention the dialog in general felt natural and flowed well.

Barghest236

Posted by Barghest236 5 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm very proud of my dialogue generally, but this chapter is a particular favorite.

I'm finding both Corleys a lot of fun to write. The new director has this shark-eyed politeness going, and Eden is just snarky as all get-out.

(Plus the director and I have something in common -- I too prefer Vivaldi's "Winter".)