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The School Assignment - 3.1 By JackNoName

After Sandra found out Jake's little secret there is no place for him to hide anymore. He has to face his demons head on as Sandra plays him to her own devious will.

It has been a long time coming, sorry for the wait. I hope you'll enjoy it. ^^

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Thanks to BigBig for making the sketch to this story!
CHECK THE PIC HERE .
And thanks to everyone who pre-read this chapter, too!

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On another note, this is also the end of the first part of the story which I’d simply call ‘’The Library Arc’’. In the next chapters we’ll also move to some different locations. I don’t want to give too much away but we’ll get introduced to some new characters close to Sandra, and prom-night is also practically around the corner. What do you think? Will Hillary become the prom queen she always wanted to be? There is much to come and the next chapter shouldn't wait too long to be release :)

Don't forget to tell me how much you liked it (or hated it!) or to give me a watch for future updates. Favorites are also always appreciated!

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I am also open for commissions (in a very wide range of fetishes). More info here.

Until then,
JNN

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Urielzael2

Posted by Urielzael2 1 year ago

I think in next chapter Jake would need new girlfriend. Also pissing off someone who can end you in so many beautyfull and horrible ways is not the brightest idea. For a moment I thought there would be something like, Sandra going to eat Daffne but Jacke made a deal to kept Daffne safe, if he would be Sandras boyfriend.

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 1 year ago

People work in strange ways :) We'll have to see how Sandra deals with it and how the next chapter will go. Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoyed it.

Urielzael2

Posted by Urielzael2 1 year ago

Honestly I would love to see happy ending for Sandra and Jake. Every1 need some love and Jake was first friend Sandra had in long time (ofc not in belly).

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 1 year ago

My mouth is sealed :I. but I like the way you're thinking. Poor Sandra, amiright?

Urielzael2

Posted by Urielzael2 1 year ago

Sandra may be a little bitchy but she didn't ask to become voress. She is a victim even though she had adapted to live with this burden/blessing/gift/curse/whatever it is.

About prom arc I would like to see Jake and Sandra becoming prom pair (sorry not American and in Poland we had something like banquet of 100 days (almost literral translation to studniówka) - 100 day before finals in high school - maybe it is same but and we don't choose leadig pair). Maybe Dafne will become Sandras friend (girlfriend is also acceptable in my standards and it ccould be huge plot twist) or Dafne will end up as rival or at least quick snack for her, idk.

Honestly I would like seeing Jake as Sandra boyfriend. And I think that his present should be pair off violin, designed especially to the voress hand (as Sandra really loved violin playing according to 2.2 story of library arc).

I love how you developed your characters, Sandra from spoiled maneating bi..., girl to character with hardness to be accepted by the world. Same as Jake from being scared of her to becoming someone who started to understand her.

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 1 year ago

Again, lips sealed. But you hit the nail on the head with the character development ^^ Iam happy it seemed to have worked out as I had hoped. The reason chapters take a bit longer is because I really try to keep the reason why they feel and how they feel it right. Thank you :)

Urielzael2

Posted by Urielzael2 1 year ago

I just can't wait to see next part of this masterpiece. Not only it got very good pick describing it thanks to BigBig (though I wonder if Sandras front hair shouldn't give her a bit emo look - straight instead of little curly) but also because I kind like bigger/fuller girl myself. well maybe voress would be a little to much body to love though I wouldn't mind girl with bit more body than so callled standars say.

Snapper314

Posted by Snapper314 1 year ago

I loved this story...

until there was Male Vore in it; which I hate. But good writing style and great visualization of the girl in the giantess's mouth. I didn't get to the end but thanks for creating & posting this regardless.

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 1 year ago

Sorry, but there is no male vore in here at all... or do you mean the prey? Also, this is not the end yet as I said in the description, there are still many chapterd to come.

Go2001

Posted by Go2001 1 year ago

Just found this story and my god it is great. Cannot wait for the next chapters. Great stuff!

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 1 year ago

Thanks :) hearing that strokes my ego a lot and makes me rly excited to make the next chapter ^^. What did you like most?

Go2001

Posted by Go2001 1 year ago

I mean shit where to begin? First and foremost you're a great writer and do well using details such as feeling,smells,facial features , and other subtle details. I loved when Sandra pinned jake against the wall and gave him the "kiss". The point where she devours an entire family was also super hot, old and young , none are spared. I find that she's still growing he more she eats great. And my god when she was toying with the girl in her mouth was the grande finale!

While I'm sure you have your limits would love to see her get bigger. Possibly Jake gives in to his inner demons ? Whatever you decide can't wait to read the next chapter.

Bravo Mate

MrQuarantine

Posted by MrQuarantine 1 year ago

This was a very well done chapter Jack. I really enjoyed the metamorphosis change that occurred in Sandra's attitude/appearance. The way she dressed, her teasing, and her method of eating all changed drastically. She went from eating people in an almost non nonchalant kind of way and transitioned to a a more teasing style for Jake. The belly smother and the texts were excellent plot devices to further his inner conflict.

As the story progresses towards the next arc it will be interesting to see how Sandra and Jake's relationship changes. I think perhaps Jake will come to learn a valuable lesson that you shouldn't piss of a Voress lol. By the end of this story you hit me with the feels though, I felt so sad for Sandra. Is she kind of killing people? Yes...BUT! in the famous words of Jefferson Airplane, she just wants somebody to love ;___;. It was harsh seeing her feelings getting built up only to get trounced on by the end of it. Hopefully Jake will come to his senses soon enough.

Overall, this was a well written comprehensive chapter that allowed for an evolving character dynamic and an intense spectrum of emotion which was brilliantly elicited by both characters by the end. The pacing of the story was smooth as always. No particular teasing moment seemed to overstay its welcome, and it fit perfectly right in between the inner conflict of Jake. That all being said, I almost feel like this chapter was a ladder on a step to bring forth even better things. The focus of this chapter was placed more on the character's emotions and seemed to be a crucial step in setting up more to come in the future.

Keep up the good work!

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 1 year ago

It's always funny to see you break down my stories better than I do myself ^^ thanks like always.

JAFFA09

Posted by JAFFA09 1 year ago

Sry for my english.
I really loved that Story bro u do a great Job in writing!! why is nobody makeing a film from that like a hentai or 3d art? that wouldve been awesome. since i read that story im in to Vore in Letter form and i want to ask if there is any other good writer out there?
Thanks for the help and keep on going we all cant wait to see the next chapter!

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 1 year ago

Heej there, that is such a great compliment, thank you so much.

And yeah, there are a lot of great writers, check out some of these:
-D3ad Zed: https://aryion.com/g4/user/D3adZ3d
lots of great big lady stories and the reason I started writing myself
-Glargicus: https://aryion.com/g4/gallery/glargicus
Has a few really good long series with a very dominant big lady.
-Chaos: https://aryion.com/g4/user/Chaos
A mix of about whatever you like.

Great people with great vore stories :)

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 1 year ago

Or you can of course just check out my gallery, which has a lot of other stories ;)

shortprey20

Posted by shortprey20 1 year ago

Man this is going to be an issue, i need to find stuff to keep me busy until the next part drops! :p

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 1 year ago

(4 months later with still no new chapter) Did you end up finding anything? xD

I am happy to say that the wait is not much loger. Chapter 4 will be a bit shorter but it will be ready in a week or 2 :) maybe sooner.

shortprey20

Posted by shortprey20 1 year ago

Lol well my research (grad school) kept me plenty busy. Sadly when (in the rare case) i had downtime i was lookong forward to playing skyrim for the 360 after lending it to a friend for a year, but she returned it in poor condition so in answer to your qiestion not really xD

And woot! I was hopong you were alive, hadnt heard from ya in a bit but happy to see ya live :p

SpokleArt

Posted by SpokleArt 6 months ago

Ok

OK

SO!

I've lurked here on Eka's off and on for a few years. I make fetish (giantess/size) art but only occassionally vore stuff so I never bothered making an account, only bookmarking a few people.

A little under a week ago I found your stuff while browsing thanks to the BigBig illustration hooking me in. My god, this voress AU concept (and particularly this chapter) made me realize I need to get off my ass, be a proper fan of artworks like I am elsewhere, and let the artists/writers know when I like their work.

This whole story is interesting, each Voress story has been a freaky pleasure, and this chapter in particular knocked me on my ass and filled my head with images. Good shit, hope you get as much out of it as I am getting out of it, and look to more good stuff in the future!

JackNoName

Posted by JackNoName 6 months ago

Thanks a bunch! Its always great to hear I can hit a few snares in people by my writing. Its a huge confidence boost and motivator.

I just checked your art on Deviant art and I have to say, I'm a big fan already. If my work inspires you, I'd love to see the result of that :D

SpokleArt

Posted by SpokleArt 6 months ago

I can't promise anything, but its not out of the question. You paint a strong mental image with your stories!