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Now he knows who his mother really is, Billy has trouble looking at her in the same way as before. All he can think of is how his mother was able to stuff herself with everything she could find. On the other side, Evelyn has many worries of her own to deal with as years of hard work and stress catches up to her. It's going to take a whole new view on their relationship for them to get out of it, after which nothing will ever be the same again...

Make sure to read the first chapter here.

Disclaimer: All characters are over the age of concent.

This has been a long time coming trade with the always smutty Chaos.

Don't forget to tell me just how much you hate it and how bad I am at writing! ^^ It will only make me better. Faves and watches are all very much appreciated too!

Hope you enjoy.


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Posted by shortprey20 2 years ago Report

2 stories from you in a span of a few days?! Life is good! I cant wait to read the next part of this series and the school assignment!


Posted by JackNoName 2 years ago Report

Hahaha :) You flatter me way too much ^^

Willing bystander

Posted by Willing bystander 2 years ago Report

Oh you tease you! Love this series, would love to read some more nasty details of her sordid past vids ;)


Posted by JackNoName 2 years ago Report

I think the next chapter is going to have enough payoff to stroke that itch ;).... oh, me tease me :3


Posted by MommysFood 2 years ago Report

I look forward to seeing where all this goes! The first couple chapters are great. Especially the prologue on this one made me wish I was Eve's son!


Posted by anyany 2 years ago Report

whelp this will probably be one of my favorites along side the freshman/rift city and guts and glory :3 kudos to you


Posted by JackNoName 2 years ago Report

Thanks for the compliment ^^ next chapter will be the final one and is going o be quite intense...


Posted by anyany 2 years ago Report

looking forward to it do you perhaps have an ETA? >.>


Posted by JackNoName 2 years ago Report

Hard to say, within the next two months probably. I am working on many other projects. ATM writing a horror/vore story, which is quite different than i'm used to but interesting :)


Posted by anyany 1 year ago Report

Cough Cough...Oh sorry don't mind me i'm just sitting here covered in dust ;-;


Posted by Bellyful 2 years ago Report

Can't wait for the next part it's a great story