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The third story featuring the lovely Dawn & Sue in their efforts to explore their mutual kinks, often at the expense of their schoolmates.

This one picks up a bit after 'Risky Sex'; Sue agreed to Dawn's previous scheme, but only if she did something for Sue in return. This is that thing.

Tried to make it not a rehash of 'A Toy' as best as I could. If I made any typos (namely getting Dawn and Sue mixed up because I seem to do that a lot, apparently) let me know in the comments.

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Jamie263

Posted by Jamie263 6 years ago Report

I enjoyed that.

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 6 years ago Report

Thanks, I'm glad o:

Death Incarnate

Posted by Death Incarnate 6 years ago Report

I liked that, though admittedly I am a fan of one kast thrill. Angela was in no way aroused so the idea of her masturbating before digesting would be strange. Sue and Dawn really do torture classmates.

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 6 years ago Report

That they do. A totally stable and rational couple, there. Glad you liked it, tho o:

Agora

Posted by Agora 6 years ago Report

Man, that was diiirtay!
Very to the point and pleasant.

I should take a page from how you do dialog, sounds like a lot less of a pain than the way I do it, and it reads nicely.

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 6 years ago Report

I was wondering when you'd get to some of my newer stuff o: Glad you liked it, tho do you mean like... the way I format my dialogue, or just the style of it? o:

Agora

Posted by Agora 6 years ago Report

Sorry I'm such a slow reader, but your stories will stay in my "Messages" until I read them XD

I'm re-reading a bit and really it was using italics for the inner monologues and foregoing the whole "this is this character, this is what she's feeling and now she's thinking this: "Blah blah"" when it's really not necessary that worked great here.

Now then, let's see if I can get my own new story out this week-end : )

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 6 years ago Report

o: Oooh, looking forward to checking it out