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Kidnapping Surprise By KinoTheCat -- Report

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OH HEY GUESS WHAT?

I decided to throw a fit because I couldn’t get my head straight working on any of the stories I was writing, and instead decided to just sit down and write some good ol’ garbage. I started this at about…. 6:30 and its now 9:10 so this took about two and a half hours Wooooo.

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Fantasia

Posted by Fantasia 4 years ago Report

Oooooh, this is lovely~ The descriptions are great, really nice details!

KinoTheCat

Posted by KinoTheCat 4 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it! I like writing details and describing things, even if I get a bit wordy sometimes. xD

Reiyali

Posted by Reiyali 4 years ago Report

Very well written albeit with a few mistakes!

Reiyali

Posted by Reiyali 4 years ago Report

All around I liked it! Poor Sarah though, I did like how she acted and her reactions

KinoTheCat

Posted by KinoTheCat 4 years ago Report

Yeah, I really liked Sarah. And part of me wanted to put in a little ending saying she woke up, since she hoped for it to be a dream. Poor thing.

I'm glad you liked it!I had a lot of fun making Sarah a fighter instead of her just sort of... giving up in her predicament.

Chameleonette

Posted by Chameleonette 4 years ago Report

Just had to leave a little comment here for you, too! Really nice little story, Kino! The vore details were just lovely and I enjoyed how you wrote Sarah and her fight to the end!