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This is a two part story I'll let you boys and girls pick weather it's fatal or not. And what will be her main method of being eaten.
Ah, the disadvantage of being a prey almost every thing sounds like so much fun, but if no one picks then i'll leave it up to my insanity to pick out the (hopefully) most enticing for you all to read.
P.S.
Please let me know what you think of my stories and if they need any work! :)
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Posted by ifyspots 6 years ago Report
Stuffed and roasted is my vote. The pill should work.
Posted by Everset 6 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment and vote! I hope to see you again next chapter.
Posted by Ento 6 years ago Report
Yea ooh, we get to pick?
I say the pill's a suger pill and she was tricked, fatal roasting. Preferably with some nice stuffing and basting.
(Maybe the placebo effect can have her survive the roast, if only barley enough to feel everything)
And if I had any major criticism, I would say that, at least in this story, the cooking and prep parts were too short. I hope they get really expanded in the next story.
Posted by Everset 6 years ago Report
Thanks for the tip and yeah I know they were a bit short but I made them that way. It is part one after all and why spoil all the fun before a big party?
Anyway Thanks for reading and the vote!
Posted by Ento 6 years ago Report
Yea, you have a good pint there. Can't wait to read the next chapter!