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F/M, unbirth, willing. Story 4 in the "Stories of the Cream and Salt" series. Ava gets a bit sexually pent up on stripper night and takes it out on her boyfriend.
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Posted by zidanes123 6 years ago Report
Another great story
Posted by LucifersChef 6 years ago Report
thanks.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 6 years ago Report
I still love the nonchalance and normalcy of "churning" in this setting. Personally, the words 'commit murder' are more of a sobering slap to me than a turn on. I suppose the specific focus on death itself is less the appeal to me, and more just the fact that it's a ridiculous and permanent expenditure for the sake of wanton abandon and lust.
It's odd how the words melt and digest and all the direct implications that the prey will not still be around afterward are such turn ons for me, but 'murder' still has this ring of taking someone's life violently and awfully to me. But I can see how some people in this setting are very comfortable with death as an aspect of what they enjoy.
Perhaps I think of 'murder' as to digestion the same way I think of 'rape' as to sex. The word invokes an implication of violence and non-consent to me which I don't like.
All that said, the fact that the two of them both obviously seemed to like what they were doing, and that it was definitely consensual, still completely got me past that and I still enjoyed the story immensely! If thinking of this intimate (and also absurdly casually fatal) moment using a word I don't like is what gets Ava (or you) off, I'm not gonna judge.
Posted by jgzman 6 years ago Report
To me, it's a power thing. "Murder" is an act of violence. It's cruel, and it's often senseless.
Churning someone, is an act of sheer power over the victim. You're not murdering them, because only a person can be murdered. Once she gets her lips on you, you're not a person anymore; you've been reduced to the status of a toy.
Posted by minasan 6 years ago Report
Oddly I can only think that she wasted all that cum when usually in this series it gets used.
Also would have expected her to draw it out more in this case.
Posted by Alienraptor 6 years ago Report
Will there be more?
Posted by LucifersChef 6 years ago Report
I'm planning more yes! Not sure on plots yet.