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Little Lamia in the Big City (REDUX) is a crowd-funded series to rewrite an old vore story I had written back in 2010 about a chubby pink naga who has to learn to live in a modern city.
This chapter was funded by Duskblade88.
If you want to contribute to this story, send at least $60 USD to http://PayPal.me/JerTheAce/ and I'll write the next chapter ASAP. It should take me no more than a week.
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Kira making new frieeennndddssss.
Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
Being chocolate flavored in a den of cannibals is probably about as shitty as things can be. I like Denyu, is she really going to get only one and a half chapters? :(
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Posted by Rictor476 6 years ago Report
Well I just finished reading this series and I thought it was a bit intriguing. I was kind of thinking that it would be about the decay of the protagonist's morals, but she did a 180 around the end of chapter 3 and the beginning of 4. Now it appears it's going to be a narrative about the protagonist's survival in what seems to be a hostile city and job.
This is also some pretty good writing. There's a nice flow to the sentence structure. It got me invested in the protagonist.
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Posted by Aces 6 years ago Report
I think that's a remnant of how I was originally going to write the story before deciding, "Eh fuckit that's less fun." Oh well.
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Posted by EuritheSnek 4 months ago Report
This is the first time I have seen a naga being hypnotized by something like a belly dancer or pole dancer. Honestly, I really like that touch, making it into an almost weakness for naga/lamia that they can be taken like that, but also as a strength for the ones who can master the skill and use it to hunt.
Yes i am aware I am commenting on a 6-year-old post. but I feel that regardless of age, an author deserves to hear praise for their work. I may 'borrow' that idea for a future work. the dancing-as-hypnotism, not the strip club. Clubs arent really my type of setting or hunting grounds.
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