Posted by Deviantfan16 6 years ago Report

Its amping up. Cant wait for the finale

Posted by BlueMarvel611 6 years ago Report

Hey Nobodyman, glad to see your new chapter up and about. This really helps with my week as it's been improving. Though it's still tough going for me. Sorry to hear how tough you've had it man. Trust me I know how it feels to be overwhelmed with life and all...especially on August. Anyways hang in there man, I know you can pull through. Now onto the show!

Okay from what I've read within this chapter, the story's really reaching its conclusion. Mostly with Marunomi having eaten most of the rescue team and planning to add the remaining kunoichi of Konoha into her stomach. Given how things turned out I'm going to be putting my review with Hinata going first and then Kurenai.

Now with Hinata you really are building up the suspense with her for this one. Especially now that she's teamed up with Anko to take down the ravenous man eater. Glad that Anko was caught up for it would seem they'll both be the only ones left to deal with this. With what's at stake I can't blame Hinata for taking charge with...whatever she's planning on doing at this point. Seems like it's now or never considering that not only she had to leave behind Anko, who's dealing with the Tsunade clone, just to go on face to face with Marunomi. I could tell that you're going to make it very very hard on the Hyuga princess on the next chapter...I honestly can't wait.

Lastly onto Kurenai's part for you really wrote down on how she reacted to seeing Marunomi's current state as well as their battle. Got to say that you really made Kurenai's character really angry with how the rogue ninja absorb/ate her entire village. Not to mention how she saw and reacted to Marunomi's words that cut her...especially the last bit with Hinata. That must've really set her off to go charging in like she did. But part of me also believed that Kurenai had planned that somewhat given that it's to help trap the enormous Marunomi into a genjutsu....only for it to backfire on her. With that, Kurenai in her despair, has become now part of a huge seven course meal of Kunoichi...which would soon become eight with Hinata coming to her.

All in all this battle you made between Marunomi and Kurenai is as impressive as ever. Something that I'd expect from the official anime. Also saw how you developed both Kurenai and Marunomi's characters. Mostly on Marunomi as she seems more and more unhinged here. Especially given how sadistic she was with taunting Kurenai with her lie of eaten Hinata. Shows just how vile she's become and mad with all the meals she's got allowing her hunger to take over.

For this chapter it was really worth the wait. I sure hope to see how things turned out for the next one. Seriously I would love to see how this would turn out for the next chapter. I can't wait to see how it'll end up. Keep up the good work, man and don't worry about taking time on coming up with the next chapter. Just take your time. Laters and keep up the good work.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

P.S.
You ever tried of making a Bio of Marunomi? You know the kind that has details on her from looks to personality to backstory? I'm just curious given.

Posted by Nobodyman 6 years ago Report

Thanks for the review as always BlueMarvel.

Have I thought about doing a bio for Marunomi? Eh, not really. I feel like, between this story and the previous one, I've explained everything about her that really needs to be explained. And as for her appearance, honestly, I'm not totally sure what she looks like myself. I'd rather just leave it up to the reader's imagination as for what she looks like.

Posted by BlueMarvel611 6 years ago Report

Okay fair enough. That said hope to see the next chapter but take your time man. Seriously I can sympathize with your hard time. So have a good day.

Elias Azule