Uploaded: 6 years ago
Views: 3,706
File size: 60.00 KiB
MIME Type: application/msword
Comments: 4
Favorites: 28
License: 
Tags: Lamia Naga Predator Weight Gain Edit
Little Lamia in the Big City (REDUX) is a crowd-funded series to rewrite an old vore story I had written back in 2010 about a chubby pink naga who has to learn to live in a modern city.
This chapter was funded by colt2.
If you want to contribute to this story, send at least $60 USD to http://PayPal.me/JerTheAce/ and I'll write the next chapter ASAP. It should take me no more than a week.
---------------
Kira makes a dangerous new friend! She seems to have a crush on her.
Posted by Phant0m5 6 years ago Report
Argh. I keep seeing little minor mistakes like using apostrophes on plural words, but you don't tend to repeat them so I usually just ignore it. Must be a typo, right?
But this. This has been going on for ages, in every chapter of your stories, and it needs to be fixed.
STOP SAYING "YEA".
Yea is actually a word, but it's NOT the same thing as "yeah". At all. It's an archaic word whose only modern use is in voting, as in "yea or nay". It doesn't even SOUND the same, when you say it out loud it sounds like "yay".
If you meant to say "yeah", then say "yeah". Not "yay".
[ Reply ]
Posted by Phant0m5 6 years ago Report
Hmm. Re-reading that, I guess I sounded a bit hostile. Sorry, I'm not trying for that, just frustrated by something that's quickly becoming a pet peeve. Right up there with people using "to" in place of "too".
[ Reply ]
Posted by Aces 6 years ago Report
Huh, I'll be damned.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VBNuLF7xR_U
[ Reply ]
Posted by HellBlaze 1 year ago Report
Kira x Neela~
[ Reply ]