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Idea that hit me a while ago; what if Rose Quartz (and other Gems in general) could digest humans and convert their mass into additional power and size, with their souls continuing to exist in them to make them even stronger?
So that led me to imagine humans sacrificing themselves to Rose during the Rebellion to make her stronger to fight on their behalf.
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Posted by thicceater 6 years ago Report
This was so Beautiful! You truly know how to make Rose into a full-fledged GODDESS! Keep up the good work <3
Posted by twitchystitch 6 years ago Report
Thanks! Honestly, some of your stuff inspired this!
Posted by thicceater 6 years ago Report
Cool! I'm glad ^_^
Posted by Miridium 6 years ago Report
Hmmm...
Well done! The whole idea of human sacrifices to gems in SU is very appealing to me! Especially since there are implications that gems are or have been seen as goddesses.
One gripe I did have though is how the thing didn't really read like a story. I didn't get the sense of a "flow" if you will from beginning to an ending. No real sense of character or personality.
That being said I think something like this would really work for the setup to something bigger. I've long wanted to see SU fics set during Rose's rebellion with all the Bronze Age stuff and cool human characters. And combining that with good vore would be the ultimate.
So yeah, great potential for future stuff here. Would love to see something that's more story oriented from you.
Posted by twitchystitch 6 years ago Report
Firstly; thanks for the long comment, it's really good getting some constructive feedback!
And I get what you mean. For a while I've been doing a lot of stories that sort of have a broad 'so this is how it is' kind of thing that seques into the story itself proper, and I think it mgiht be getting to be too much of a habit. Depending on your tastes in reading, it doesn't flow too well. Like, sort of just a snapshot?
Thanks for sending this in! I'll think good and hard about doing something with this in mind.