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A commission for Combat. Dating can be tricky if the only guys who interest you are also the ones best equipped to devour you. And now there's a sequel Predator Training
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Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report
It's certainly an unusual couple to be sure
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Yep. Still it seems to have worked out better for them than in most of my stories.
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report
Maybe this totally healthy relationship will work out for the both of them. Perhaps she could lure in prey for him because prey trust prey then betray them and listen with guilty delight as they digest. Or maybe not. Who knows
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
I've got some notes about how that kind of trick works in my setting although mostly regarding prey that lure others into traps in exchange for money. It can work for a while but once something goes wrong it tends to go very wrong.
Posted by Skittles209 6 years ago Report
Wow, a strange rollercoaster. Nice to see another of your work. And revolving around some of the natural predator and prey couplings of your older works.
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. I do enjoy using species that are strongly associated with each other as predator and prey in my stories.
Posted by sharky 6 years ago Report
two fins up ~
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Thank you.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Definitely worth the commission.
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Thank you again. It was great fun to write as well.
Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report
Another great story! Twists and turns from start to finish, messed with my expectations, and I really enjoyed it. This is an interesting relationship and I wonder that we'll see more of them in the future!
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. I often struggle to fit characters I've used before into a different story so usually write new ones for each story. I have been meaning to built up a collection of recurring characters though, so maybe you'll be in luck with these ones.
Posted by TootCore 6 years ago Report
My my. My moral standards oppose me to all cruelty and yet those stories are like guilty pleasures, delicious pastries I can't help but enjoy much like Aira.
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
A seductive predator can be very hard to resist.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 6 years ago Report
A wonderful story, I love the suspense and the way the prey is terrified not knowing she is safe.
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Glad you liked it.
Posted by WATCHMAN 6 years ago Report
I wish your written works such as this could be made into an depth comic or graphic novel. You paint such lovely art with your words.
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Thank you, and yeah, I wish I had the skill to turn some of these stories into comics but I've never been very good at keeping my art consistent so sequences just come out looking weird.