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Yeah I know this chapter feels a little forced but it was changed because it was screwing me up down the line for future chapters and the story was hitting a dead end.
Posted by Killjoy364 6 years ago Report
and I thought someone was finally going to be digested but oh well. but it seems yet another deal has been made but when will Diana call on that one deal she made with zuzen ages ago?
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Posted by SuperSlosh 6 years ago Report
I gotta say this particular "close call" seems kind of forced.
Still good to see an update
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Posted by Aces 6 years ago Report
Admittedly, it is. That's because the original story was going to have Jordyn gurgled, but after 10 chapters of writing in that direction it started to bother me like why the fuck would Leyla keep hanging out with the group?
So yea, this chapter is a bit forced. No, I won't fix it.
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Posted by Aces 6 years ago Report
Trust me though, the original version would have made the next nine chapters ALL forced.
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Posted by zerowag 6 years ago Report
yeah thought jordyn was gonna bit the dust and layla to follow
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Posted by Aces 6 years ago Report
Another time, I promise. The way this was originally going to go however, it was screwing things up down the line.
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Posted by joe354 6 years ago Report
I gotta agree with everyone else BUT I do look forward to the later parts of this. I also do hope you do have the recon stories to share. Like an alt folder for those stories.
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Posted by Aces 6 years ago Report
It's all going on Patron as the months go by.
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Posted by Zalzas 6 years ago Report
Heck, the way Diana was casually digesting Jordyn while everyone just shrugged it off, that made me blush so hard. I'll be checking patron for when you upload those scrapped chapters ;)
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Posted by BurningRuby1909 6 years ago Report
SAME! "BLUSHES HARD"
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