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Jealousy and Lies By SwordkingX5

Uploaded: 10 months ago

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After a harsh battle nearly robs Issie of his Life and Aisa saves him.
Akeno decides she will have Asia's power for herself no matter what it takes.

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Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 10 months ago

Nice story but there’s quite a few punctuation errors dispersed throughout

SwordkingX5

Posted by SwordkingX5 10 months ago

sorry about that.

acrylic

Posted by acrylic 10 months ago

I'm eager to see how the story will go

SwordkingX5

Posted by SwordkingX5 10 months ago

Glad you enjoyed it.

Primal18

Posted by Primal18 10 months ago

Nice story although like Apostolos said there are some errors . Also you might want to consider writing your stories in past tense it might make them better.

SwordkingX5

Posted by SwordkingX5 10 months ago

what do you mean Past tense?

Primal18

Posted by Primal18 10 months ago

For example saying stuff like grabbed instead of grabs. I have an idea for the request you asked me to do how about you do it then I look over it for you and correct any errors I encounter so you can improve your stories. I can still do it by myself if you still want me to.

SwordkingX5

Posted by SwordkingX5 10 months ago

It's a tempting idea,
However I take quite some time to make my stories.
and I'm currently working on one.

However pointing out the mistakes does help me a lot and I appreciate it.

Primal18

Posted by Primal18 10 months ago

Okay

AndAnotherOne

Posted by AndAnotherOne 10 months ago

I think it's season 5 that was supposed to be released this year, but I don't know. If a new season WAS released, can you link the site it's on for me? I just can't get enough of Issie asking Rias "Let me poke them titties" XD

AndAnotherOne

Posted by AndAnotherOne 10 months ago

Aaaand random double post? Are you able to delete one or are they stuck there?

SwordkingX5

Posted by SwordkingX5 10 months ago

Fixed it,
Now for that link.
Sorry that's not something I provide here.

But yes that is funny.

AndAnotherOne

Posted by AndAnotherOne 10 months ago

Damn, oh well. Can you at least confirm that a new season is released? Can't exactly go searching for it myself right now.

AndAnotherOne

Posted by AndAnotherOne 9 months ago

Damn. Oh well, thanks anyways!

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Brazzel

Posted by Brazzel 9 months ago

I just started this anime and I was not quite prepared for what I got.

SwordkingX5

Posted by SwordkingX5 9 months ago

the anime or this?

Brazzel

Posted by Brazzel 9 months ago

The anime. I was quite prepared for this ;)

SwordkingX5

Posted by SwordkingX5 9 months ago

I see.