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The Vorgy By Personad -- Report

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A first timer trying to do vore work.
Comments on how to improve or change style welcomed

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Kfhunterguy

Posted by Kfhunterguy 1 year ago Report

I think this is great. Personal request, actually hit on the casual/fatal theme next time. But honestly it was a really good ready. Plenty of dialog. Hope to see more.

Personad

Posted by Personad 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I got more that I will upload tomorrow.
I don't usually do casual/fatal theme or I do mention it. Just look out for the next one

LillyBells

Posted by LillyBells 1 year ago Report

so wait a friend asks her to save her sister and her friends, but she lets a swedish vore girl eat and digest them in her womb? I don't understand xD

Personad

Posted by Personad 1 year ago Report

Well its more like the girl who was asked to save her friend's sister and friends is able to vore other people and while they are inside her no one can be digested.

LillyBells

Posted by LillyBells 1 year ago Report

ahh i see, it wasn't very clear to me, i understand now haha

Personad

Posted by Personad 1 year ago Report

Sorry
I'll try to be more clear next time

Primal18

Posted by Primal18 1 year ago Report

It’s not bad but you need to add spaces so everything isn’t squished together. Also you should describe each character so we know what they look like.

Personad

Posted by Personad 1 year ago Report

Thanks for the advice

Primal18

Posted by Primal18 1 year ago Report

Your welcome

smog1

Posted by smog1 1 year ago Report

I wish I was the boyfriend of the girl who can swallow and unbirth so much to look big and sexy with such a massive belly

Personad

Posted by Personad 1 year ago Report

Maybe you can.
She is bi after all.

smog1

Posted by smog1 1 year ago Report

Yaaay ^-^