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Big D

Posted by Big D 1 month ago

Amazeballs writting as usual. :3 You should definitely get these published. And if you think it might be a weird book to publish, I saw a book in Wales called The Haunted Vagina, and said vagina, was actually a portal to hell.


P.S. In Diana's monologue, specifically her remembering Zuzens words, its versus not verses. Got literally stuck at dat bit for 5 min trying to find the meaning of the sentence. xD So, yeah, again, amazing read. OH! And I love the Metro reference. ;)

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 month ago

Not gonna get published. Intellectual property of Bethesda with Fallout and stuff.

I'll fix the typo, though.

Big D

Posted by Big D 1 month ago

Well, you could turn it into a book, don a long trench coat, a fedora and wait in an ally way occasionally telling people that you got the good stuff if they wanted it. :P

bubbalubber

Posted by bubbalubber 1 month ago

Probably wouldn't be too difficult to change stuff to make it your own if you did publish it :) most of the stuff thats fallout ip specifically is fairly generic, the power armour, the vaults, tge deathclaws and stuff. The characters and writing are definitely strong enough to carry the story in a slightly altered setting :)

Killjoy364

Posted by Killjoy364 1 month ago

hmm...the character development for both Diana and marin are nice touches but it feels as if Diana is loosing what made her exciting back when she first appeared but its understandable why you took this approach. still as a reader I hope something happens soon that either makes the threat of vore come to life or a new enemy shows up

Killjoy364

Posted by Killjoy364 1 month ago

also on a side note Amelia has been in so many situations where she almost got digested that she should have diamond skin by now

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 month ago

There's a reason she takes a good four or five hours to gurgle. :P

Killjoy364

Posted by Killjoy364 1 month ago

by now she should have become heavily resistant due to how many close calls. not even mentioning her suicide idea to smuggle herself to the party via Diana which I thought was about 7 to 8 hours worth of digest time

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 month ago

Oh goodness no not nearly that much time.

Killjoy364

Posted by Killjoy364 1 month ago

are you kidding me XD well either way it was mostly unclear how much time had passed from the one chapter that ended in Amelia feeding herself to Diana and the time the party happened the next chapter since all it said was in the middle of the night I believe

crumplim

Posted by crumplim 1 month ago

Would be good for Diana's character progression if she got eaten sometime

spud67

Posted by spud67 1 month ago

So is Diana ever going to be eaten by, say, Violet or Juno? Or is she just immune to being eaten in the story?