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Yes I'm alive! Sorry about the long wait between chapters. I've been spreading myself over this and another story I am working on, and in turn, making both take longer to complete. Also life stuffs, and I also got a new job, and my laptop likes to overheat a lot, and other excuses ^^;
Chapter Summary: Now that N'Shaundra can change her size at will, thanks to being able to understand her lamian text, her and Zach's relationship only deepens from here. However, one night, that attachment almost gets Zach killed...
The following day, once N'Shaundra returns to her normal, giantess size, she goes out to hunt, leaving her loved one home alone. When Zach hears the familiar sound of a large body displacing trees and foliage, he assumes it's N'Shaundra... But in fact, it is another giantess, another lamia... It's N'Shaundra's sister.
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Posted by joeburp22181 6 years ago Report
Wow, such a twist in the story, I didn't expect N'Shaundra to meet up with a blast from the past, or more specifically her sister... at least so soon. I can totally understand where As'Lanna is coming from, as you reminded me clearly what Zach's woman used to be like. It's just crazy to see it in a whole new light. And of course Zach had a reason to be scared when his life was so close to being lost... man I felt that loss....
Like. The best way I could describe it is. While I was reading it, I actually had the taste of fear in my mouth, and my heart was beating a bit faster. I can admit to taking things rather seriously, especially when I get into them. I tasted and felt fear for Zach, worry for N'Shaundra. You do great work in explaining how the heart feels. I felt that pain of Zach dying, and him never getting to see his love again. You get attached to characters, at least, I do when I read. Watch T.V. series. But then again, I do wear my heart on my sleeve.
Such an interesting dynamic with these sisters here. N'Shaundra having to give up a huge portion of her latest life, the one that means the world to her, just so she can see her family again. Whom she seems to both appears to miss, move, maybe even mildly loath in some spaces of thought. Almost as if a part of her is disgusted by how she acted to Zach when she first met him. Strange both girls can separate that so well though, still, while they are out hunting... not that it was ever a problem for As'Lanna as it is obviously, in this Saga. I really wonder what their mother is like... if she is as 'kind' as either girl think she is. Especially for Zach's sake.
I really look forward to seeing how things will pan out, or not, for the lamia's man and her family, especially for As'Lanna in the future. Especially if her family can't learn to respect her decisions. So much culture, so many shocking things happening left and right, so much expectarion. It's so bazaar it's addicting! The part where As'Lanna gets her ass whooped for nearly killing Zach, that was priceless. I still don't know how to feel about the awkwardness though.
Clearly you inspire great feelings of uncertainty, sometimes mild disgust.. in your words when you want to. Sort of like when one feels disgusted by whom they might be related to through history, and while they can't change what happened, it doesn't make them feel any less like shit because of the facts. It's just such a fun contemplation to switch through such a large amount of thought, you always leave it hanging until the perfect moment to change it. I love the suspense.
Though you also do justice to many other emotions, not just poking at awkwardness and uncertainty, as those are healthy and natural to have in dialog and story. There's so much love and worry, care, fun sexy times, cuddling with a romantic significant other, it really just balances out well. So many fun and unexpected turns... I really do appreciate the time you took in creating this story. Even despite the fact that you have a whole other story you are working on at the same time, and a stupid overheating comp... been there... sure I will be there again.
As always. A treat to read your works. I look forward to more as the time and interest allows.
Joe
Posted by TystKrigare 6 years ago Report
I still can't get over someone enjoys my writing as much as you do lol, I can't tell you how good that makes me feel to wake up to such a comment in the morning and read it over coffee.
I'm always worried about my writing ability, so I'm glad I was able to convey what I wanted to through my writing. I try my best to leave little to the imagination as to what someone is thinking or feeling, trying to paint the most vivid picture with every interaction through just words alone, and give characters as much of a personality that I can to make them feel more "real" or believable.
Just having someone out there who reads me stuff and likes it enough to favorite it or comment on it is enough to make me want to keep writing. Once you see the other project I'm working on, you'll understand why things are coming out slower, but hopefully it'll be worth it.
Thank you as always Joe for commenting ^^
Posted by joeburp22181 6 years ago Report
Excellent! I'm sure it's worth the wait.
Have a great day!