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Here is that story I promised everyone about a week back, a story about two young lovers and the certain conflicts between them. This story is one close to my heart, as I tried to include everything I love from comedy and romance to drama and science fiction into a vore story. After two rounds of revisions, I'd say the story is well polished, even if all these genres don't give the final story a consistent tone. I may return to this story later and work on it again, but for now I think its worth sharing with the world.

May you all enjoy the story about a Maiden's Heart.

Edit: I cannot figure out how to remove the Working Title for the story without completely removing the story and re-uploading it. I think its a funny joke at my expense, so I'll keep it up for now.

This story was originally written as a RP with my friend,  Ruler101. While I have revised the story well-beyond the length and depth of the original RP, he deserves credit for creating the backbone of the story with me.

As always, it's a pleasure to have you all read my stories. I aim to please. Feel free to leave a comment if you have any questions, concerns, or anything else you want to ask of me. Until next time!

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Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 1 year ago Report

Torika eating someone and getting an attractive figure after digesting said jerk? YOU BRILLIANT GENIUS. and it sounds like she'll eating other jerks so that's a plus.
I'm actually working on a Churio story now

Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 1 year ago Report

Why thank you! I loved writing and revising that scene a lot; Hikari made for a great prey, and Torika a terrific predator. I'll usually put plot before vore, hence why it takes so long to get to the vore scene in my stories, but I always try to give extra love to the vore when we get there. Its fun for everyone!

And yes, Torika does plan to eat other jerks! While there is no direct continuity in these T-Rex na Kanojo stories yet, I like to think this takes place after Churio ate Numano in my other story, "Hands Off My Human." Perhaps Torika could get pointers from Churio on gobbling people up, or the they team up to take down a threat to their men? The sky is the limit with girls like them!

Oh, you are? What is the Churio story about?

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 1 year ago Report

T-Rex's are cool
he Churio story isn't complicated or in depth but I find it fitting since it's Churio, she's not that complicated of a girl/dino. I've never really focused extremely on plot but I do like to include good moments and some rather tender times. My stuff is now officially on my DA Account so you can read them.

Any ideas for future stories you'll do?
T-Rex's are cool

Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 1 year ago Report

I see. I look to seeing it come out!

Hm, sure, why not? I don’t know if I would use any of these ideas myself in a complete story, but they could make for fun snippets or conversation.

1. Churio, Kram, and company all have an arm wrestling contest. Yuuma promises a free meal for the winner. Whoever wins interprets That Offer to eat one or more of the group.

2. Churio is PE at a high school. In order to encourage her students to run faster during track lessons, she chases after them. Anyone she catches, she eats.

3. Churio and Yuuma Take a tour of a factory. For reasons I never developed, Churio is hit by a growth ray and turns to the size of a real life T-Rex. She proceeds to eat everyone nearby while Yuuma rides on her body, taking the whole thing in stride.

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 1 year ago Report

If you'd allow it I'd like to use these potentially in a future story. Of course I have my own spin on these:
1. They do the whole contest but Yuuma instead unveils a restrained sauropod stuffed with meat that he got through undisclosed means
2. She wins. Gets detention and eats the detention students and teacher.
3. Replace the growth ray with "gradually turn into GOJIRA" ray and have other test subjects get out for her to eat
They won't be the next thing I write but will be put on a waiting list. Again if you let me.

Preview of my story in the same fashion
1. Churio waited for Yuuma to come home but found him beaten by a few hoodlums. Including a Carnotaurus and a Gallimimus. Fight ensues and you can guess how it goes for them

Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 1 year ago Report

Those monsters! What did Yuuma ever do to deserve that? They almost certainly deserve what’s coming to them.

Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 1 year ago Report

They tried mugging him. Fortunately Churio will take care of them