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Anti-tales: The Anxious Mother (feat. T-Bone) By TheVoreBoy

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Anti-tales or anti-fairy tales are defined fairy tales which have a tragic ending, often with the antagonist prevailing. The Anxious Mother is modern take on “A Modest Proposal” that raises the question: “How difficult is it to recognize fake news?”

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TheButcher

Posted by TheButcher 8 days ago

A very interesting story indeed! I am so glad to see you back! You seriously made my day! ^^

TheVoreBoy

Posted by TheVoreBoy 8 days ago

Thank you! I hope my anti-tales come off as a bit more philosophical.

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 8 days ago

I love this! Hope to see many more!

TheVoreBoy

Posted by TheVoreBoy 8 days ago

Thank you! I am working on more.

Choco0

Posted by Choco0 8 days ago

That totally hits my alley, I just wish it was a little bit more longer with more teasing at the beginning (like the mother could be against the idea at first and then the guy try to convince her) and also more dialogues between the characters (including the preys before they get eaten) and maybe also more detail on the characters mindset and reaction would be good too!

But I love the concept of this, thank you for sharing <3

Also my interpretation is that he just made up everything and just wanted to eat her children :3

TheVoreBoy

Posted by TheVoreBoy 7 days ago

The word count was limited on purpose (although I don't disagree). I've just found if I have a set goal of 1000 words for a short story it make it easier to write as opposed to my longer earlier stuff which would literally take months to write out.

Going forward I'll try to include as much dialog as I can of course!

smukmave

Posted by smukmave 7 days ago

I really enjoyed this! It brought back some dark memories of studying 'A Modest Proposal' at university, but I definitely like your twist on it!

I would have loved to see more of the post-vore stuff, some teasing of the prey and maybe some more pre-vore dialogue, but that's just me. It's pretty damn perfect as it is.

TheVoreBoy

Posted by TheVoreBoy 7 days ago

I'm getting a better handle on limited word count so I think it's doable. ;)

PiViBear

Posted by PiViBear 7 days ago

Cool! ;o))

In my fantasy I continue, that T-Bone will not digest the kids... ^^