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Mirage the Oasis (STORY) By Komodo -- Report

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Allow me to introduce Mirage.
My year-in-the-making and rather out-there character. I normally don't work with creatures like this in my own settings, at least not when they are Realistic Settings, but I figured "what the heck?"

I also went back to my old style of writing, as my previous story where I tried to improve got less than thrilling feedback. So I figured it'd be best to stick to what I know, especially in a 20+ pager like this one.
That said, I hope you enjoy my pet project of the past year. I still got plenty of items in the workshop, I have just been occupied.
(PS. I made this character scat-play friendly, but decided to remove said parts. Let me know if that was a mistake)

Happy Thanksgiving to any and all who celebrate it!
And thanks again to  Brohan for making the image! You can find the full picture HERE: https://aryion.com/g4/view/427820

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eatmeplease

Posted by eatmeplease 6 years ago Report

I like it! I'm curious to know why you took the scat out though. Maybe you should put it back in and upload that as a separate version? Up to you though. ::)

Komodo

Posted by Komodo 6 years ago Report

I'll see about re-creating the small scat parts
tomorrow. I mainly avoided it because I was a bit
paranoid over what I dared to show on the debute
of this new character :I

eatmeplease

Posted by eatmeplease 6 years ago Report

I guess some people might not like it, yeah. But if you have two versions and one is clearly labeled scat, I think it would be alright.

Kartomic

Posted by Kartomic 6 years ago Report

What a fantastic story! Glad to see you're back into writing. <3

Komodo

Posted by Komodo 6 years ago Report

Thank you kindly! I never really stopped, it is
just a rare thing for me to FINISH a story xD
But, yes, it is good to be back =)

BlueFox

Posted by BlueFox 6 years ago Report

Nice new predator there. Would love to introduce her to my blue vixen Katrin.

Komodo

Posted by Komodo 6 years ago Report

Shouldn't be impossible =) What do you have in mind?

BlueFox

Posted by BlueFox 6 years ago Report

Ill tell you my ideas in a PM

Ev0nix

Posted by Ev0nix 3 years ago Report

Any more of her?