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An indigo snake finds a grain silo full of mice and the obvious happens

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anyonarex

Posted by anyonarex 4 years ago Report

mmm, good story, especially love that ending, let the main course fatten itself up from the starter and then move in to feast. :p would of loved to see it though.

Fischie

Posted by Fischie 4 years ago Report

Thanks for your comment. It was a last minute idea and I contemplated writing it out. Though I think it would have ruined the surprise somewhat.

anyonarex

Posted by anyonarex 4 years ago Report

hehe, the story works either way. :p Certainly made a nice reveal and little comments about the cat payoff in the end.

Casdan1492

Posted by Casdan1492 4 years ago Report

That was one hungry snake! He ate the whole family, hehe. Good for him. That unexpected prey at the end was a nice addition too, hehe.

Fischie

Posted by Fischie 4 years ago Report

"Oh look. Cat claws."