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bubbalubber

Posted by bubbalubber 1 year ago

Well now that shes pregnant that pretty much seals zuzens fate :P

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago

Only a matter of time noowwww. :O

HiddenPangolin

Posted by HiddenPangolin 1 year ago

Does this confirm that Zuzen is going to get digested? I'm a little disappointed if it is, because I was looking forward to him being a pred. For a bunch of chapters, he was the one doing a lot of the dominance in the relationship, but then the sudden heel turn after his birthday led to Violet being the one doing the eating. It was a little jarring for me, and I was hoping he'd turn it around, somehow.

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago

I confirm nothiiing. Though think about it. It'd be awfully anticlimactic if I just killed him off right here.

HiddenPangolin

Posted by HiddenPangolin 1 year ago

That's fair!
And I was thinking that was what was going to happen, until last chapter. As soon as I saw Legion, I thought "YAY! Plot!"
If I'm going to be honest, I've been kind of iffy about seeing somebody axed off. On the one hand, I've gotten attached to these characters, I like Zuzen and Violet and Jeremy and Juno...
But on the other...vore.
It's an interesting conflict for me. :P

LordDantai

Posted by LordDantai 1 year ago

You used 'for staters' a few too many times with the doc. It did become a bit noticeable by the third time.

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago

Hm, thought I'd pick up on that in proofreading. Let me see if I can resolve that.

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago

And fixed.

Havoc

Posted by Havoc 1 year ago

Boulder city, legion, heightened NCR alert.
sorry but if you could pour anymore gasoline on this obvious powderkeg we have going here, that'd just be greaaaaaaaaat for the coming climax

Havoc

Posted by Havoc 1 year ago

also, last paragraph, "Her body swells out with his form, barely distinguishable under the thick layers of fat padding his figure"

Should be Padding HER figure, since you're referring to Violet. or Violet's figure.

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago

No, that was correct. It's Violet's body padding around him. The lumps and bumps are padded by her fat around his figure.

Havoc

Posted by Havoc 1 year ago

huh. well, it is somewhat confusing, I don't think I've ever seen it written like that. feels like it's missing a word, like the word around between padding and his.

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago

I'll try to reword it at some point, then.