While I definitely do love the little details you put on her swimsuit, where it's tight but then it wrinkles in the middle between and under her breasts as well as the side of her stomach, along with that one effect o her stomach implying her prey is shocked, there's a lotta issues I'm seeing here (and that a lotta people are ignoring, as per usual on Eka's).
Her arm, the one we can see most of, the proportions are a bit off. I understand it's possibly due to her hand's position (which does look a bit uncomfortable if I'm gonna be honest with that wrist), but the forearm and upper arm aren't proper lengths. Namely, lower arm too short, upper arm too long.
The arm itself is too long too overall, as her hand should be just mid thigh with her hand extended. Here, it should be slightly above, but not only is she moving her shoulders up in a shrug AND her hand isn't hanging down, her arm must be ridiculously long otherwise because it still reaches mid-thigh.
Another issue is her torso to thigh ratio. Thighs are about as long as the torso if you start from the shoulder and end above the pelvis, but here her thighs are REALLY long or her midsection is too short.
I guess the final, somewhat minor complaints that merit being mentioned in an already long message, is the sketch lines are a bit dirty or messy, which is easy to do if you set aside some time to do that, and her prey's head is a little oddly shaped and small in size compared to her's.
WHEW that got a bit long but, yeah. I won't leave a useless comment, I wanna see you improve and do even more awesome stuff, because despite my criticisms I do still enjoy this picture, I just feel it has some issues worth looking over, and notifying for next time. It's good work, keep it up, and I hope we see more good stuff outta yah.
Well, now you know why I felt the need to speak up here. Everyone is too either afraid or unwilling to, and I've done so in the past numerous times with other pictures/artists. Possibly big-headed of me but, I think it's fair to say I had a part, be it small or definitely noticeable, in helping artists I reached out to improve. My favorites is full of that proof.
So yeah, keep it up. Happy to have you on here, and I hope you can advance as an artist as well.
Just notice it to day, but expanding what hibbyjibby said,the arms are "too long". It's a good rule of thumb to know that the elbow should be level a bit below the rib cage. While the wrist of the arm is at the hips. Her arms are raised so the elbow should be at the bottom of her rib cage in this picture. as for the shoulder, I feel like it's too front on here. Like it's popped out of place and is pointed directly at the viewer then being naturally pointing to her side. we should see her arm attracting the the torso but the shoulder seems to block that.
From the space between the shoulder to the neck, that space should be raised. Sloping upward into her raised shoulder but here it's flat and levels out. Remember that the collar bone also rise with the arm.
Lastly I want to talk about the hand, I feel it's a bit small but that the rest of her size maybe throwing me off. That's not what I want to get into. I feel like her hand is is to high. Don't know about most people, but my hand can't make a 90 degree angle bent angle at my wrist.
other then those things this piece is fantastic. It's a piece.
Posted by Bright 6 years ago Report
Nice stretch on that swimsuit.
Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 6 years ago Report
Good luck to you bae.
Posted by Vdiem 6 years ago Report
I do like that sudden drop of the prey. give it more gravity.
Posted by magicalgypsyllama 6 years ago Report
Beautiful
Posted by whatisthissheet 6 years ago Report
The stretch looks great, also one-piece swimsuit is the best outfit.
Posted by KillerPerro 6 years ago Report
Awesome Stretch!
Posted by BasedDarkBum 6 years ago Report
This is so good on so many levels, the flesh slightly visible through the stretch is incredibly well done!
Posted by CakePisces 6 years ago Report
One of the best arts on the site
Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report
While I definitely do love the little details you put on her swimsuit, where it's tight but then it wrinkles in the middle between and under her breasts as well as the side of her stomach, along with that one effect o her stomach implying her prey is shocked, there's a lotta issues I'm seeing here (and that a lotta people are ignoring, as per usual on Eka's).
Her arm, the one we can see most of, the proportions are a bit off. I understand it's possibly due to her hand's position (which does look a bit uncomfortable if I'm gonna be honest with that wrist), but the forearm and upper arm aren't proper lengths. Namely, lower arm too short, upper arm too long.
The arm itself is too long too overall, as her hand should be just mid thigh with her hand extended. Here, it should be slightly above, but not only is she moving her shoulders up in a shrug AND her hand isn't hanging down, her arm must be ridiculously long otherwise because it still reaches mid-thigh.
Another issue is her torso to thigh ratio. Thighs are about as long as the torso if you start from the shoulder and end above the pelvis, but here her thighs are REALLY long or her midsection is too short.
I guess the final, somewhat minor complaints that merit being mentioned in an already long message, is the sketch lines are a bit dirty or messy, which is easy to do if you set aside some time to do that, and her prey's head is a little oddly shaped and small in size compared to her's.
WHEW that got a bit long but, yeah. I won't leave a useless comment, I wanna see you improve and do even more awesome stuff, because despite my criticisms I do still enjoy this picture, I just feel it has some issues worth looking over, and notifying for next time. It's good work, keep it up, and I hope we see more good stuff outta yah.
Posted by pbysteria 6 years ago Report
Thanks for the critique. Normally dont see them on this site so it means a lot. Will definitely keep working on proportion for future uploads.
Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report
Well, now you know why I felt the need to speak up here. Everyone is too either afraid or unwilling to, and I've done so in the past numerous times with other pictures/artists. Possibly big-headed of me but, I think it's fair to say I had a part, be it small or definitely noticeable, in helping artists I reached out to improve. My favorites is full of that proof.
So yeah, keep it up. Happy to have you on here, and I hope you can advance as an artist as well.
Posted by Vdiem 6 years ago Report
Just notice it to day, but expanding what hibbyjibby said,the arms are "too long". It's a good rule of thumb to know that the elbow should be level a bit below the rib cage. While the wrist of the arm is at the hips. Her arms are raised so the elbow should be at the bottom of her rib cage in this picture. as for the shoulder, I feel like it's too front on here. Like it's popped out of place and is pointed directly at the viewer then being naturally pointing to her side. we should see her arm attracting the the torso but the shoulder seems to block that.
From the space between the shoulder to the neck, that space should be raised. Sloping upward into her raised shoulder but here it's flat and levels out. Remember that the collar bone also rise with the arm.
Lastly I want to talk about the hand, I feel it's a bit small but that the rest of her size maybe throwing me off. That's not what I want to get into. I feel like her hand is is to high. Don't know about most people, but my hand can't make a 90 degree angle bent angle at my wrist.
other then those things this piece is fantastic. It's a piece.
Posted by StormyRange 6 years ago Report
That's some amazing work! Well done!
Posted by ninjajoeman 5 years ago Report
Noice subtle skin coloring through the suit.