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Under The Bed... Kinda... By dragonjerky

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Tags: ?/F Female Prey loli Pre-Vore Semi-willing Soft Vore Underage Edit

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Hey! It only took two months, but I finally got around to finishing that suggested drawing!

If it wasn't obvious, the suggestion was "girl eaten by monster under the bed." A classic. Thanks to Tyslan03 for that suggestion. I hope you find this image to your liking!

I decided to relate this image to the world that Vore-tan lives in. It would seem the colony's defenses malfunctioned and allowed some mutants to get into a populated area. This girl isn't too bummed about being eaten, though. Now she doesn't have to take an exam!

(Notes: I'm not 100% happy with this and I'm not completely sold on the dialogue. This image may be updated in the future. Additionally, these were one-off characters, so I don't have info on them and they might not return...)

*Also* Happy New Year!

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Uri

Posted by Uri 3 months ago

Please... More... You can't end it here! </3

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

I was just going to leave it as this, but a part of me is very tempted to do a follow-up. I'm thinking two more images to finish it, then compile it into a one-page comic! Don't know how long that'll take, tho...

Uri

Posted by Uri 3 months ago

Well how ever long, I'll wait! Your work is amazing!

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

Aw, I'm humbled! Thank you so much!

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 3 months ago

I'm not a fan of the dialogue either, but that may be a matter of taste. Everything else is fine o:

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

I originally wasn't going to include any. It was a last second addition. I felt the image needed more context and wanted to convey that she's intentionally not resisting. If you have any suggestions to improve the dialogue, I'll gladly consider them. I highly respect your writing ability, after all!

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 3 months ago

Hmm... I think first thing is in a comic format, brevity is best. I see a lot of folks go overboard on single panels, and while this isn't too bad, it's always good to limit it to a sentence or a phrase.

As for the words themselves, I think this is where taste comes in. I feel like being eaten would be, well... terrifying on a primal level. I guess it'd be hard to fit given the context, but I think that'd help make it more believable if she was more afraid o:

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

Thanks for the feedback! I agree, I definitely went a little overboard. I love the "show don't tell" method, so I kinda missed the mark on that.

I think I did this because 1) I was drunk(haha) and 2) there's a lot of world building that is missing for the context to be fully conveyed.

As I continue to produce more work in this setting, it will become clear that the defenses of the LHC are garbage. The people of the LHC are pretty desensitized when a mutant attack occurs. Some handle it better than others and there are certainly people that would prefer not to experience the food chain from the bottom. I'm not super keen on creating unwilling vore, so I tend to focus on the characters that handle it in the "better" category. ;)

I greatly appreciate the input, and I'm definitely going to have a think on how to improve this panel!

Cuddlekins

Posted by Cuddlekins 3 months ago

I mean, I've nothing against willing vore, but there's a certain degree of suspension of disbelief o: It can be a hard sell for something like this, so it might be good to plan out some specific motives for wanting to be eaten.

TheVoreEngineer

Posted by TheVoreEngineer 3 months ago

Really lovely art DJ. With the dialogue, I don't mind the first part, that's ok, but I can probably agree the second half can be improved upon, but that's why we all keep going right, we get to improve :)

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

Thanks! No that I'm no longer inebriated from New Year's grog, I'm going to be looking at making this image better!

UnknownThread

Posted by UnknownThread 3 months ago

I can't think of anything to say other than it's great!

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

Thank you! I appreciate that!

Tyslan03

Posted by Tyslan03 3 months ago

She looks so cute and adorable and delicious! Glad you liked the suggestion. I think it turned out great!

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

Thanks a bunch! I may be biased on this one, but I also think she looks cute, adorable and delicious!

Arta_Shrike

Posted by Arta_Shrike 3 months ago

I really love your art, and I want to learn more about your LHC Colony 8. Adore what you did with the monster design here - how you made it look mutant and grotesque without losing the cuteness inherent in your art style.

Happy 2018, and I can't wait to see what you produce next!

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

Thank you! I really enjoy fantasy settings for vore, but people really seem to be responding to this scifi/post-apocalyptic one. I think I'll focus on this setting for the foreseeable future. Maybe I'll do a write-up on it at some point! Again, thank you for taking an interest in my art!

Arta_Shrike

Posted by Arta_Shrike 3 months ago

I also really enjoy fantasy settings! If I might take a guess, I'd bet that, more than just being sci-fi, people can really take an interest in a fleshed-out consistent setting. I know I certainly do, and I've been intrigued by the little hints you've been dropping about this setting that imply you've got more details buried beneath the surface. I promise you that if you do make that write-up, I'll certainly read it!

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

You do make a very good point. I forget sometimes that there are people here who are actually interested in world-building and details to accompany their vore. I'll usually insert my own when there is none and just kind of assumed everyone else did the same. Vore is a very diverse playing field and everyone has their own tastes and kinks. I don't really worry about if I check everyone's boxes when I make stuff and go for what I like. I only ever expected a few favs and a follower or two. It blows my mind how many people have actually paid attention to what I'm doing. I certainly don't want to let you guys down!

Arta_Shrike

Posted by Arta_Shrike 3 months ago

(and, just as an incidentally, I know you weren't a fan of your dialogue, but I thought it was cute. I liked how it explained that how she wasn't thrilled about being eaten, but still wasn't resisting now that it was happening)

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

I certainly like the feeling that it conveys, but there's just something off about the execution. I'm going to keep working on it with the goal of maintaining the same spirit of the original message... but better!

sweetladyamy

Posted by sweetladyamy 3 months ago

I'd be kinda the same way, though I'd definitely would insist on NOT being chewed...

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

Don't worry! I'm not a fan of hard vore, so all of my prey characters that have this request will be obliged!

Eater99

Posted by Eater99 3 months ago

I quite like this piece! It’s a pity she still has her clothes on, but I’m sure those will digest off her soon enough once she’s in it’s belly ;)
Love the casualness of it all, the linework and colors are spot on, and it’s refreshing to see a new, strange pred. I can hardly wait to see what more you have in store!

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 3 months ago

Thank you very much! Also, there is a strong likelihood that you are correct about her garments ;)

CGIS

Posted by CGIS 3 months ago

Ooh, I love the design of the monster! And the gil's face is relaly cute, too! She looks nervous but also a bit excited xD ;) MOnster-under-the-bed vore happens to be one of my favorite scnarios, too ^^

dragonjerky

Posted by dragonjerky 2 months ago

Thank you! There are certain things I really love about vore scenarios and nervous (but ultimately complicit!) prey is one of them! I think any vore scene has much more impact if it focuses on the emotions that the prey is experiencing. Though, I empathize with prey, so that could be why...