This looks amazing! I love the simple painterly style you have here! The pale pink highlight on the hair could be blended a little more, but the rest of her looks nice and slick. The belly bulges look nice and dynamic as well.
Hopefully this feedback will suffice. Keep up the good work! :D
Looks good. In my opinion though, and maybe not what you're going for but her stomach looks like it's got different lumps? Like it's not just one person in there? A bit hard for me to describe.
if your single again hen dont be shy about asking random men but mainly the artstyle is good as is onlything i can think of is the bumps need to be a lightershade so they dont look stiched on
Feedback huh? Well if nothing else apart from stories, I got my start being a critique, not master but something pretentious and mighty like that.
I wanna point out here that you did good on her arm proportion, the one holding the phone. Often people forget that both parts of the arm are around the same length, upper and forearm, with the hand making the forearm a little longer.
That said I'm seeing a few issues pop up the more I look at the picture. I can tell you had an issue connecting the neck and neckbones to the torso, so you cleverly (or maybe unintentionally) hid where it connects with her hair. Speaking of her hair, I share the sentiment that the shading on it could be a lot stronger. As is, it sorta looks a little hastily done and doesn't really line up with the rest of the shading on her; too much dark on the side, not enough light. If there's enough light to illuminate most of her face, then the majority of her hair would also be.
Another is her breasts. Breasts are supposed to be a bit teardrop shaped, and here they're a little more round than usual. Not looking for old, saggy boobs now. But they do look a little oddly shaped I feel. They're also not at the same height each, HER left one being a lot lower than it should be compared to her right. Perspective issue, she's at a 3/4th's pose but her breasts are almost facing directly at us, the viewer.
And last but not least is the stomach type. It reminds me very much of OkiOppai's, which I find personally really offputting and a little lazy to be honest. Look more like tumours compared to limbs struggling and poking out. More personal preference I know, but I do wanna mention it atleast.
So, yeah you wanted feedback, I sure hope I offered some useful ones here. In summary: you have a visually appealing/cute character, and you definitely have the anime face aesthetic down very well, along with atleast the shape of her hair. But almost everything else about her is lacking definition or I can tell you're hiding things you may not be too confident in trying out, like hands. The one hand we do see is, like I said, a bit lacking in definition.
Keep at it. I may critique a lot but I never discourage people who DO wanna get better from trying to get better. I wanna see if you want it badly enough, and I do hope so.
Also is this more F/? ? I think so since, is she talking to a girl in her gut and her boyfriend is on the phone, or is it reversed? Just asking.
I read the feedback and i want to thank you.
You are right about hiding things ! I usually hide things i can't draw or things that are hard to draw for me, i will try to get better cause i want to be better :)
And you don't discourage people, in fact you keep them motivated to git gud!
Anyway THANKS this is what i mean for feedback a good way to learn by errors and from critiques
PS: i'm still trying to refine my style of drawing
Well hey, if it's one thing you can expect outta me reliably, is critiquing. Not a lot of others do what I do. Probably get cold feet or coddle others, hmm.
And ahaaa, I figured I was on point about that. the neck lines look unusual, they kept going across the neck, and it made me think. Crop tool, crop this, crop that, haha. Give it a shot though, the things you're unsure about won't be any easier if you put em off.
There are tons of free resources out there that can help; websites, guides, programs, even Youtube channels and videos are a good source. Many of my friends use them, and some are even quite big names on here. So use em, they're free! I can PM you a few if you like.
Anyway I'm always willing to lend a helping hand. Or, maybe helping eye in this case. But still, I make it a point to give feedback if asked. Even if it isn't I still might. (･ω･)
So anytime, good fellow. Hope we see more from you. It'll mean you're still going strong, and I like seeing that. Also if you're trying to refine your style, learn the fundamentals or basics first. THEN style comes afterwards much more easily. Mark of a good artist is playing with your basics and making em look good.
So there's a newly single cutie somewhere? Wonder if they're tasty.~
This one is fun! There's a few small details that might make it even nicer--perhaps Kylia could be leaning forward a bit more if if her butt is sticking out like that?
Gotta say I like the idea behind this pic, and the oc is cute.
As for feedback. The belly looks different compared to some of your other stuff, but that might be due to the pose and bulges. She also seems to be missing a belly button. Lastly the shoulders look a tad off with the neck but that may be due to again the pose and how you did her hair.
Hope this didn't seem mean or anything, the pic is very cute and sexy. Keep up the good work!
Feedback Aye?
The lines seem a little rough on the edges but overall they are pretty good, the shadowing could use a little fine tuning but that's pretty nice as well. That phone...was it left out in the sun or something? Or was that the physics of the mirror? Anyhoo, it seems overall to be a nice premise.
What I can say is that I really like the shading and the "style" it looks more polished then what you usually upload but that doesn't mean that I find your other art to be inferior just good but in other ways. Hope that you get something out of that ^^'
Posted by JaredCupcakes 6 years ago Report
This looks amazing! I love the simple painterly style you have here! The pale pink highlight on the hair could be blended a little more, but the rest of her looks nice and slick. The belly bulges look nice and dynamic as well.
Hopefully this feedback will suffice. Keep up the good work! :D
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
thankiu <3
Posted by StormyRange 6 years ago Report
Looking really good, very well done! -u-
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
<333
Posted by 157and493 6 years ago Report
Amazing job, but what is the story here?
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
not much of a story lol, i just draw the first thing it come to my mind
Posted by 157and493 6 years ago Report
Well, I suppose that is respectable too.
Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 6 years ago Report
Nice coloring and lighting affects, definitely a step up from usual.
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
Thankiu reaper!
Posted by WPSmells 6 years ago Report
Looks good. In my opinion though, and maybe not what you're going for but her stomach looks like it's got different lumps? Like it's not just one person in there? A bit hard for me to describe.
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
Maybe cause there isn't just a person inside ;) You can imagine and that's the cool part !
Posted by POPObro 6 years ago Report
if your single again hen dont be shy about asking random men but mainly the artstyle is good as is onlything i can think of is the bumps need to be a lightershade so they dont look stiched on
Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report
Feedback huh? Well if nothing else apart from stories, I got my start being a critique, not master but something pretentious and mighty like that.
I wanna point out here that you did good on her arm proportion, the one holding the phone. Often people forget that both parts of the arm are around the same length, upper and forearm, with the hand making the forearm a little longer.
That said I'm seeing a few issues pop up the more I look at the picture. I can tell you had an issue connecting the neck and neckbones to the torso, so you cleverly (or maybe unintentionally) hid where it connects with her hair. Speaking of her hair, I share the sentiment that the shading on it could be a lot stronger. As is, it sorta looks a little hastily done and doesn't really line up with the rest of the shading on her; too much dark on the side, not enough light. If there's enough light to illuminate most of her face, then the majority of her hair would also be.
Another is her breasts. Breasts are supposed to be a bit teardrop shaped, and here they're a little more round than usual. Not looking for old, saggy boobs now. But they do look a little oddly shaped I feel. They're also not at the same height each, HER left one being a lot lower than it should be compared to her right. Perspective issue, she's at a 3/4th's pose but her breasts are almost facing directly at us, the viewer.
And last but not least is the stomach type. It reminds me very much of OkiOppai's, which I find personally really offputting and a little lazy to be honest. Look more like tumours compared to limbs struggling and poking out. More personal preference I know, but I do wanna mention it atleast.
So, yeah you wanted feedback, I sure hope I offered some useful ones here. In summary: you have a visually appealing/cute character, and you definitely have the anime face aesthetic down very well, along with atleast the shape of her hair. But almost everything else about her is lacking definition or I can tell you're hiding things you may not be too confident in trying out, like hands. The one hand we do see is, like I said, a bit lacking in definition.
Keep at it. I may critique a lot but I never discourage people who DO wanna get better from trying to get better. I wanna see if you want it badly enough, and I do hope so.
Also is this more F/? ? I think so since, is she talking to a girl in her gut and her boyfriend is on the phone, or is it reversed? Just asking.
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
I read the feedback and i want to thank you.
You are right about hiding things ! I usually hide things i can't draw or things that are hard to draw for me, i will try to get better cause i want to be better :)
And you don't discourage people, in fact you keep them motivated to git gud!
Anyway THANKS this is what i mean for feedback a good way to learn by errors and from critiques
PS: i'm still trying to refine my style of drawing
Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report
Well hey, if it's one thing you can expect outta me reliably, is critiquing. Not a lot of others do what I do. Probably get cold feet or coddle others, hmm.
And ahaaa, I figured I was on point about that. the neck lines look unusual, they kept going across the neck, and it made me think. Crop tool, crop this, crop that, haha. Give it a shot though, the things you're unsure about won't be any easier if you put em off.
There are tons of free resources out there that can help; websites, guides, programs, even Youtube channels and videos are a good source. Many of my friends use them, and some are even quite big names on here. So use em, they're free! I can PM you a few if you like.
Anyway I'm always willing to lend a helping hand. Or, maybe helping eye in this case. But still, I make it a point to give feedback if asked. Even if it isn't I still might. (･ω･)
So anytime, good fellow. Hope we see more from you. It'll mean you're still going strong, and I like seeing that. Also if you're trying to refine your style, learn the fundamentals or basics first. THEN style comes afterwards much more easily. Mark of a good artist is playing with your basics and making em look good.
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
True true and true ! I will try :)
Posted by MotherOfMonsters 6 years ago Report
So there's a newly single cutie somewhere? Wonder if they're tasty.~
This one is fun! There's a few small details that might make it even nicer--perhaps Kylia could be leaning forward a bit more if if her butt is sticking out like that?
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
You are right, i'm still learning to draw poses and i use A LOT of references and software to simulate poses. btw thankiu
Posted by Datonenumbnuts 6 years ago Report
Gotta say I like the idea behind this pic, and the oc is cute.
As for feedback. The belly looks different compared to some of your other stuff, but that might be due to the pose and bulges. She also seems to be missing a belly button. Lastly the shoulders look a tad off with the neck but that may be due to again the pose and how you did her hair.
Hope this didn't seem mean or anything, the pic is very cute and sexy. Keep up the good work!
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
Thankiu for the feedback :)
Posted by Rooster 6 years ago Report
Feedback Aye?
The lines seem a little rough on the edges but overall they are pretty good, the shadowing could use a little fine tuning but that's pretty nice as well. That phone...was it left out in the sun or something? Or was that the physics of the mirror? Anyhoo, it seems overall to be a nice premise.
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
Thankiu for the feedback !
Posted by AronIsAGrem 6 years ago Report
Grem approves O//w//O <3
Posted by anthony050 6 years ago Report
What I can say is that I really like the shading and the "style" it looks more polished then what you usually upload but that doesn't mean that I find your other art to be inferior just good but in other ways. Hope that you get something out of that ^^'
But awesome art as always <3
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
Thankiuuuu :)
Posted by anthony050 6 years ago Report
I forgot to say thank you for uploading your great art <3
and sorry that I don't leave comments more often I'm just unsure of what to say >//<
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
no problem :)))
Posted by linthia 6 years ago Report
Feedback ? Really need to say that I always love your work ? '^'
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
<3 thankiuu linthia :)
Posted by linthia 6 years ago Report
<3 Maybe one day I'll end up as Kylia's fat <3
Posted by Desire122 6 years ago Report
Who knows ;)
Posted by redsquallff8 6 years ago Report
i love this. please eat me next