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18: Don't Call Me That By dreamweevil

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Despite Alicia's warnings, Belle insists on the rest of the story of how she captured Rob and how she tortures him.

Alicia was right: the pleasure she feels is infectious, and sweet Belle isn't strong enough to resist it.

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Posted by MasterGryph 9 months ago

Innocent sisterly embrace?
Not buying it. While Belle wasn't a focus of the previous chapters, I don't believe she was ever sweet.


Posted by MasterGryph 9 months ago

Of course, part of that comes from how things turn out.

When the entire family except one person (Who's too traumatized from *several* things to say anything) dismisses her end as irrelevent, it makes one think that there was never a real familial bond in the first place - just a bunch of apathetic teenagers.


Posted by MasterGryph 9 months ago

Though, that was much worse in the original draft.


Posted by dreamweevil 9 months ago

I'd have to say that Belle is neutral. She works to keep everyone together and tends to align with whomever she's shared thoughts with most recently. Here it's demonstrating a risk of neural induction: if Alicia can rationalize her actions to herself, Belle will almost automatically agree with her.