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21: Holdout By dreamweevil -- Report

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Daisy, the youngest in the family, is feeling left out. That's good news for Rob, who just might have someone on his side for a change.

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MasterGryph

Posted by MasterGryph 6 years ago Report

No right to do what she did?

Daisy had the right to do a lot more. Amy had the obligation to do a lot more. And all of them knew that.

dreamweevil

Posted by dreamweevil 6 years ago Report

Absolutely.

I liked the way this came out. Amy in many ways is the youngest one here, the most recently upgraded and still desperately trying to catch up to events that are unfolding as fast as she can comprehend them. She's been swept up in Alicia's "infection", clearly, leaving Daisy as the only one independent enough to start to turn things around.

Daisy hates her sister and loves her at the same time, which (to me) just felt... real. Nobody's got good answers or solutions, and Alicia's vicious snap at Daisy is a sign that even Alicia knows that Daisy is right/.