Posted by acrylic 6 years ago Report

So, did Alicia once plan to keep Rob inside her and not discard him?

Posted by dreamweevil 6 years ago Report

I don't think she really thought it through. Alicia is impulsive and complicated, and not as evil as she seems. Her early exposure to a very evil man traumatized her and caused her to associate sexual pleasure with the idea of dominating men.

She worried (correctly) that this pleasure could be infectious.

Since then she's tried to warn the people around her (including Rob) of this problem, but nobody's really listened. She was hoping Belle would set her straight, but Belle is fairly weak and instead was convinced that Rob deserved what he's getting. Together, the girls are able to nearly convince Daisy of the same, that Rob wanted and/or deserves this fate, but Daisy's growing up to be a lot stronger than anyone thought.

Posted by Nothinghere 6 years ago Report

Upgrading alice seems like a really bad idea from a in story perspective. (From a writting perspective its good if you like cruel pred torturing their victims) i get that shes suppsoed to be a assasin/police but sadistic psychopaths arent good at those jobs but if they did have those jobs they wouldnt be my first choice when handing out the biggest guns
And i might have missunderstood but if the change doesnt effect a womens mind to a huge degree and they share information.
Isnt robs ex going to be really fucking pissed when all is said and done?
If i were her i would be angry even if she had just did it the normal way and he was standing in front of me reborn saying "hi its me im fine" but after everything he went through and he might not even live? I lack the vocab to express how angry i would be. But considering the other girls seem okey with it maybe the change does affect the mental state?

Im probably overthinking things. Its probably just a fetish story. But youre a good writter and good writing gets me invested and makes me think.

Posted by dreamweevil 6 years ago Report

That's awesome to hear that this story makes you think! That's really the angle I'm going for: I think even the fetish elements are stronger when they're supported by the story.

Alicia's in a tough spot. She wants to be loved and appreciated and is really hurting inside. The people around her are mistaking that intensity for strength and foisting authority upon her that she doesn't really want.

She cries out to her sisters: "You don't want this! It'll change you!", but they haven't taken that seriously, so Alicia shares her memories hoping that her sisters will talk her down from what she's doing. Instead, her thoughts have infected her sisters, to the point where they support Alicia simply ridding herself of Rob forever.

The only one who seems to be able to stand up to Alicia is Daisy: but Daisy's still young.

Cerys, Rob's girlfriend, was furious with Rob when she found he knowingly put himself in a position to be unbirthed by another woman. She felt cheated on. It became very easy for Casey (Alicia's girlfriend, who we presume has been fully infected by Alicia's line of thought) to seduce her, especially with a promise of being able to confront Rob later on.

The question at this point in the story: What's Cerys going to do when that confrontation happens? How strong is her will compared to Alicia's?

Posted by TheBlueOne 6 years ago Report

From these last couple chapters, I'd honestly say Alicia doesn't deserve what she got. She deserves far worse.