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Mollusc Madness By doomfister

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Fluttershy decides to take her mother out for a relaxing hike and picnic, vore ensues from an unlikely predator.

Got the idea for the monster after going through a list of folklore creatures from Europe with a friend, settled on this one as it was kind of unique.

First real attempt at disposal, so please let me know how it turned out.

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Posted by Nebbie 10 months ago

This is the kind of disposal I like, although it was rather odd that Fluttershy didn't think much of her mother letting it out right there (nor the screams).


Posted by doomfister 10 months ago

glad you enjoyed it, i love me some disposal, but the second part of your comment confuses me slightly.


Posted by Nebbie 10 months ago

I mean the early bit with Fluttershy's mother having diarrhea, not the hairball thing.
I'd expect Fluttershy to have a slightly different attitude than "well, this is the woods" (she'd likely be grossed out), to go a bit further away to not hear most of it, and to come back running when she hears the screams,


Posted by doomfister 10 months ago

i image fluttershy as one of those people who dos shit in the woods, seeing as in the show she has repeatedly gone to relatively wild places to see animals. because of this i thing shitting in the woods is right up her alley, but you are welcome to disagree, as its a matter of opinion.

in regards to not reacting to the screaming, as i have been on hikes were someone has got the shits, they have at times sounded like they were being murdered. hence this is where are experiences must differ, as some of the quotes i have heard people yell are so hilarious out of context.


Posted by doomfister 10 months ago

thank for for the clarification btw.