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Yay I'm not dead! And Happy New Year, as belated as it is. I'm sorry I haven't uploaded in a while. As I've mentioned in my most recent blog post, I've just been dealing with a lot of life stuffs, as well as just struggling to find the inspiration and drive to write in general, be it new projects or continuations. I'm afraid that that might have carried over to this, because I'm not sure if this is my best work or not. This is a new kind of vore for me to write about, so I don't know if it's good or not, but I can only hope those of you who read it enjoy it.

Also this would have been uploaded last night if I didn't get hit with a power outage that screwed up this whole description which was written way better than it is now. Yay snowstorms!

Summary: Doctor M., a scientist at Rift Laboratories, is working on his own project in his spare time at the lab, a fulling functioning android girl in hopes of being one of the greatest scientists in the modern age with his advancements in technology. He has nicknamed her "Adeline" or "Ada" for short, and her AI makes her inadvertently sassy, but that ends up being a part of her charm, even if it annoys Doctor M. at times.

After running a test on her digestive system, Doctor M. calls it a night, and heads home, leaving Ada plugged in. At Black Canyon Incorporated, Rift Labs' competitor within the scientific community, an evil plot brews. The CEO informs his underlings that they're on the brink of bankruptcy, and realizing his flock of yes-men are incapable of saving the company he made, he takes it upon himself to be the company's savior. The CEO hacks into Rift Labs, and finds all the files available about their top scientist, Doctor M., as well as his achievements and current projects. Killing two birds with one stone, the CEO hacks into Ada, rewriting her code so that she would deliver herself to Black Canyon's front doors and be turned into their crowning achievement to save them from closing down. At the same time, Ada would rid Rift Labs of their most prized scientist, allowing Black Canyon to get ahead of the game.

Back at the lab, Ada begins to act strangely, her personality far more advanced and quirky than the night before. She insists Doctor M. finishes his shrink ray above all else, and when the ray is completed, she uses it against her creator, shrinking him down and threatening to swallow him alive, claiming it is in her programming to consume him.

(Feedback for this would be greatly appreciated, solely because I am unsure if it's good or not since it's a new kind of vore I've never written about. The image I used is from the new Nickelodeon series, I Am Frankie, which was honestly half of the inspiration to write this to begin with. The other half was thanks to something a friend of mine was doing which helped me out with a lot of the details for the story. Also, I named her Adeline, or Ada, after the on-board computer used in the Orbital Frame Jehuty in Zone of the Enders. I hope everyone likes the disgusting amount of references in the story too, from the projects Doctor M. was working on, to the way Ada speaks.)

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Nateman9

Posted by Nateman9 10 months ago

I always loved andriod/robot girl vore, I dont know what exactly it is but something in the way they talk or about the synthetic digestion being so real, its a strange kink Ive had for a while.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 10 months ago

This is just very depressing in a bizarre form of robotic ntr, can you do an alternative version where Ada’s defensive protocols do not get overpowered by the hack?

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

I've left the ending open-ended enough to do something of a redemption arc if enough people actually ended up liking this piece.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 10 months ago

Can the second part destroy the hacker? Maybe the doctors clone is brought back as an indigestible slime that has controllable solidity?

joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 10 months ago

Cool, another great story from Tyst! Welcome to the new year my man!

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

Thanks! You too ^^

MechaSharkZilla

Posted by MechaSharkZilla 10 months ago

I'm personally not a fan of fatal vore, especially so when it's malicious, but this was definitely well made. You haven't post your touch, that's for sure.

Though I am sore that you teased us with that un-digested cookie. I wanted her to find a programming loophole so bad after that. :(

MechaSharkZilla

Posted by MechaSharkZilla 10 months ago

Lost your touch*

'Grumbles about there needing to be an edit button for comments'

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

I'm on the fence about it myself but it was also a last second decision. I'm happy to hear that the story seems to have turned out okay.

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 10 months ago

While having him left undigested for a while before initiating the digestion might have been fun, I think you made the right choice.

Draconatedz

Posted by Draconatedz 10 months ago

I thought this was good, but it felt like it was dragged out a bit between the shrinking and swallowing/digestion. Not to say I didn't enjoy her teasing or mocking, but I would expect an android to be straight to the point, and eat with no mercy or stalling.

Also, this is my bias coming through, but I thought it was leading up to a same size swallow, since you mentioned she could eat large food without swallowing. There also wasn't anything in the tags to indicate micro, so that left me a tad disappointed. Still though, great job! Looking forward to more from you!

Draconatedz

Posted by Draconatedz 10 months ago

*eat large food without chewing

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

My apologies for the tags. I had a feeling I was forgetting something to add there...

And I understand your criticism about getting to the point. I almost did that too, but I also didn't want to make the reader go through this whole thing for an interaction that would take a paragraph or two to go through. I wanted there to be somewhat of a payoff after all of the build-up.

I am glad though that you enjoyed the story regardless, and thank you for following ^^

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 10 months ago

I think that the teasing added to the story and made it better.And why wouldn't an android be able to do it. After all it's supposed to be fully sentient and hence it's closer to a human than the machines currently existing.

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 10 months ago

This is a really really great story. Really loved it. I've always loved android preds and there's way too few of them. I think you did a great job in making her act like a proper android while also having quirks which made it clear she still was a machine and not a full human.

I most definitely wouldn't mind seeing similar stories from you in the future. Also I really liked the detail you want to with the digestion and the interior of the stomach.

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

Thank you so much ^^ I was worried it wasn't going to turn out good because I've never written something with this kind of a pred, let alone the internal differences.

The lack of android/robot vore is one of the reasons why I wanted to write this, because it's severally untouched from what I can tell.

Again, thank you and I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 10 months ago

Yeah android/robot really is a void compared to other categories. And as mentioned I think you did a great job on describing the insides.
And your fears of how it was to turn out were put to shame. This is one of the best stories I've read in years.

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

Since this story has gotten so much attention, way more than anything I've written in the past for whatever reason, I'll more than likely be making some kind of continuation of it in the future. I don't mind contributing to a niche that has almost no attention when it needs more.

I always try to be very descriptive with my writing in general. I try to paint a picture as best I can, leaving as little to the imagination as possible. With something so... different in terms of vore, I wanted to be sure to be very detailed with Ada's insides. Everyone knows the pink and fleshy parts of a generic predator, but something man-made could be anything, and I wanted the reader to understand everything possible going on without leaving loopholes or questions.

And I'm somewhat speechless over the compliment, other than just being really flattered and saying thank you so much again ^^;

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 10 months ago

Really looking forward to seeing more like this! And I think youre descriptiveness really benefitted the story.
You deserved the compliment. It is a really great story.

minasan

Posted by minasan 10 months ago

I'm a bit disappointed with the ending. The first half was so sweet the relationship between the two. That I had hoped that her personality would find a loophole in the reprogramming to save him.

It was a well written story, but sad.

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

I'm sorry the ending wasn't what you were hoping for, but I'm glad you thought it was well written. I tend to enjoy a bit of drama, good and bad, happy and dark, into my stories. It just depends on the subject really. As I've mentioned several places, I now intend on continuing the story since it's become one of my most popular uploads for whatever reason, which I can guarantee a happy ending with what I have in mind.

Mustbebetween

Posted by Mustbebetween 10 months ago

Love robot-girl vore! I really enjoyed this story. The pacing seemed a bit slow at bits, but it definitely had a good pay-out. I'd be interested to see that redemption arc.

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

I felt it was a bit slow in parts as well, and I'm pretty sure I know exactly which ones you're referring to, but I'm happy you enjoyed the story anyways ^^ I just wanted there to be enough detail and/or setup so that there weren't really any loopholes to be questioned.

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 10 months ago

To be frank I didn't find it slow in any areas. And I feel that there isn't really anything which can be cut without creating loopholes.

Zond

Posted by Zond 10 months ago

The story was great!
judging by the fact that the folder appeared, whether to wait for the continuation?)

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

Thank you ^^ and since this story for whatever reason has gotten so much attention compared to my other pieces, I can't NOT make at least a sequel to wrap things up. A continuation will come in time.

Zond

Posted by Zond 10 months ago

glad to hear)
and yes, I also hoped until the last
identity bypass protocol (
but it seems that the personality was more clearly formed only after the death of a doctor
in my free time I was going to read about the lamia

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 10 months ago

Well the whole idea was that the CEO that hacked into the android ended up messing around with a lot of other things in the process, inadvertently helping develop more of a personality for Ada.

And if you do end up reading some of my other pieces, I hope you enjoy them as well ^^

kronwolf

Posted by kronwolf 4 months ago

I absolutely loved this story. One of the best I have red :D
There is a few things I woundered about in the story. Did the director of the other company specifically order Ada to assimilate the doctor or is this something she figured or wanted herself? Also the ending with the green liquid I don’t understand.

TystKrigare

Posted by TystKrigare 1 month ago

Sorry for the late reply. The dialogue implies the Director had Ada devour Dr M in order for there to be no evidence of foul play, getting rid of their competitor's top scientist, and assuring no one comes after Ada once she leaves the compound.

The part with the green liquid was briefly mentioned earlier. It's a cloning tank. The ending implies Dr M prevented his permanent death by having a backup clone of himself made in case anything unforeseen happens. This will be expanded upon in the sequel whenever I get around to it.

Thank you by the way for the praise ^^ I'm always happy to hear someone enjoyed reading my stories.