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Daisy needs to run one critical errand, completing her promise to Rob McLeane and getting him back into his own body at last.
She never should have made this trip alone.
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Posted by 747474 6 years ago Report
I bet rob is having aton of fun, going through this again, only more explicit.
Posted by dreamweevil 6 years ago Report
Rob should have been furious. So close to being made "real" again, and now the woman he's trapped inside is being taken apart.
The fact that Daisy is too busy and unfocused to think about Rob is important to the story... more on that later.
Posted by Sauvegarde 3 years ago Report
I definitely know the source of inspiration behind this. Good job transcribing it with such a luxury of details!
Also this twist manages to be both surprising and entirely predictable, which is always a treat :)
Posted by dreamweevil 1 month ago Report
Very much the basic lifecycle from Echidna Wars DX, which I think is terrific!