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A somewhat naive deer breaks one of the rules of her society and is caught by a wolf. Contains hard vore and gory scenes. Commission for Randomness
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Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report
I do enjoy hard vore and it is a rare thing. The kind reassurancing predator is another thing that's scarce... I must admit, it doesn't exactly sate my carnal desires in such the same way as cruelty but it's a good story and I still appreciate that.
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Yeah, I don't do much hard vore so this was something interesting and different to try.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
What a great story. Well done.
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Thanks. I'm still working on your next one and will hopefully have that finished soon.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Awesome to hear.
Posted by unicorn 6 years ago Report
Wow, this is absolutely wonderful. I have a real soft spot for scenarios like this. Bless this commissioner xD And thank you for sharing!
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Thank you. I'm a big fan of your work as well.
Posted by ShadowedFigure 6 years ago Report
This was a very cool story. Pretty different from anything I've read before, and quite engaging.
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by Randomness 6 years ago Report
Beautiful. Wonderful. Loved it. Depiction of characters are amazing. Dialog is superb. The psychological journey of the prey is top notch, and that last little moment when the prey suddenly realizes what is going to happen is sublime. You pull those off so well, and its one of the biggest reasons why I commissioned you. Thank you for the work. :)
"... can't sleep here." melted me. So innocent and delightful and slightly sad. Well done.
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Thank you. I'm thrilled you liked it and had a lot of fun writing it as well.
Posted by QAQAQ 6 years ago Report
This is just sooo intriguing! You always know how to synthesize a commendable story. Seriously man, you can try to write some good novels
Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report
Thanks. Hopefully will have some more ready to post soon.