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Lucky Find By BizzareBlue -- Report

Uploaded: 6 years ago

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A somewhat naive deer breaks one of the rules of her society and is caught by a wolf. Contains hard vore and gory scenes. Commission for Randomness

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ChaoskampfNunc

Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report

I do enjoy hard vore and it is a rare thing. The kind reassurancing predator is another thing that's scarce... I must admit, it doesn't exactly sate my carnal desires in such the same way as cruelty but it's a good story and I still appreciate that.

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report

Yeah, I don't do much hard vore so this was something interesting and different to try.

Combat

Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report

What a great story. Well done.

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report

Thanks. I'm still working on your next one and will hopefully have that finished soon.

Combat

Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report

Awesome to hear.

unicorn

Posted by unicorn 6 years ago Report

Wow, this is absolutely wonderful. I have a real soft spot for scenarios like this. Bless this commissioner xD And thank you for sharing!

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report

Thank you. I'm a big fan of your work as well.

ShadowedFigure

Posted by ShadowedFigure 6 years ago Report

This was a very cool story. Pretty different from anything I've read before, and quite engaging.

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report

Glad you enjoyed it.

Randomness

Posted by Randomness 6 years ago Report

Beautiful. Wonderful. Loved it. Depiction of characters are amazing. Dialog is superb. The psychological journey of the prey is top notch, and that last little moment when the prey suddenly realizes what is going to happen is sublime. You pull those off so well, and its one of the biggest reasons why I commissioned you. Thank you for the work. :)

"... can't sleep here." melted me. So innocent and delightful and slightly sad. Well done.

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report

Thank you. I'm thrilled you liked it and had a lot of fun writing it as well.

QAQAQ

Posted by QAQAQ 6 years ago Report

This is just sooo intriguing! You always know how to synthesize a commendable story. Seriously man, you can try to write some good novels

BizzareBlue

Posted by BizzareBlue 6 years ago Report

Thanks. Hopefully will have some more ready to post soon.