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This is a story for a friend of mine on Deviant Art. I hope you all enjoy, and make sure to tell me how I did.
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Posted by Caniption 6 years ago Report
It's alright, over all.
When the scene for the bed shows up, the sequence between the bedroom and the living room doesn't occur and in the second to last paragraph, Echo is referred to as Muriel by Muriel.
Posted by RexLou 6 years ago Report
Yeah, I saw the issue in the last paragraph but didn't have the chance to fix it in the original file before I uploaded. Thanks for the feedback, though. I appreciate it.
Posted by Undernom 5 years ago Report
I wonder who this was made for...~