Our hearts go out to Sap, trusting, she gave him a shot, and even gave him every opportunity to avoid this. Woe is she for having her heart betrayed. LOW is he for being so callous, If all he walks away with are but mere scratches, he should count himself lucky and be banished from Sap's gaze.
On a more serious note, I love the level of emotion you've brought into this tale. You really see the mindset of some characters, and how the society in this world you've introduced us to functions. Some small edits to the dialogue here and there could be helpful, but otherwise the writing and planning of this series is amazing. I also do enjoy your art style; what it lacks in fine detail, it more than makes up for in its expressiveness
Thank you, that means a lot. It's very odd going back to read my first few pages and I sort of hate them because of the sloppy approach I started out with, but in a way the style is getting kind of charming and I'm actually happy with this as a whole. I hope the next chapter is just as entertaining for everyone.
Hah, at this point in the story, vore is the last thing on my mind XD What have you done to me? I cannot believe I can enjoy a vore story without any vore in it!? What fresh new hell have you awoken!?!?
“This is the end of Chapter 2. These 3 chapters were written as a sort of trilogy with the exciting climactic ending being in the 3rd part. I also don't plan on stopping at part 3, but I am excited to wrap up this arc completely and finally stop teasing all you perverts that just want Sap to eat someone. Believe you me, I'm just as hungry as you are.” -page 40
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report
That probably hurt
Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report
Didn't realize Sap had claws like that, but damn if the guy doesn't deserve it.
Posted by Novalori 6 years ago Report
Did not know the snek had claws
Posted by Bowyer2 6 years ago Report
Honestly that little turd deserve it.
Posted by necryel 6 years ago Report
Our hearts go out to Sap, trusting, she gave him a shot, and even gave him every opportunity to avoid this. Woe is she for having her heart betrayed. LOW is he for being so callous, If all he walks away with are but mere scratches, he should count himself lucky and be banished from Sap's gaze.
On a more serious note, I love the level of emotion you've brought into this tale. You really see the mindset of some characters, and how the society in this world you've introduced us to functions. Some small edits to the dialogue here and there could be helpful, but otherwise the writing and planning of this series is amazing. I also do enjoy your art style; what it lacks in fine detail, it more than makes up for in its expressiveness
Posted by BSGreyM 6 years ago Report
Thank you, that means a lot. It's very odd going back to read my first few pages and I sort of hate them because of the sloppy approach I started out with, but in a way the style is getting kind of charming and I'm actually happy with this as a whole. I hope the next chapter is just as entertaining for everyone.
Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 6 years ago Report
I know this is a serious moment but since I recognized the reference I can't help but have a giggle.
Posted by BSGreyM 6 years ago Report
Thank you, I was hoping someone would laugh.
Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 6 years ago Report
And now I need to share this treasure with you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wJ1BGy5dzD0
Posted by BSGreyM 6 years ago Report
The sad part is I can almost picture Sap and Lemmy having this conversation.
Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 6 years ago Report
Hehe.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
I see some Borba inspiration here
Posted by BSGreyM 6 years ago Report
Moreso Arby's, but yeah.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Arby's?
Posted by BSGreyM 6 years ago Report
ThatBrassyGuy gets it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wJ1BGy5dzD0
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Ah, that joke. Ha indeed then
Posted by Bigfatpiggy 6 years ago Report
I'm digging the "slap" tag.
Posted by Spider8Fiend 6 years ago Report
Some of the best storytelling I’ve seen on this website. Bravo, bravo!
Posted by BSGreyM 6 years ago Report
If I can only figure out this "vore" stuff I'll truly be of value to society.
Posted by Spider8Fiend 6 years ago Report
Hah, at this point in the story, vore is the last thing on my mind XD What have you done to me? I cannot believe I can enjoy a vore story without any vore in it!? What fresh new hell have you awoken!?!?
Posted by walkingbyself 6 years ago Report
Poor Sap, she gave him a chance and he broke her heart. He had best start running before she decides to get her meal after all.
Posted by SiHiUiLiSiEi 6 years ago Report
Sap Slap!
Posted by TheNamesJackson 6 years ago Report
To be continued ==>
Posted by TheNamesJackson 6 years ago Report
“This is the end of Chapter 2. These 3 chapters were written as a sort of trilogy with the exciting climactic ending being in the 3rd part. I also don't plan on stopping at part 3, but I am excited to wrap up this arc completely and finally stop teasing all you perverts that just want Sap to eat someone. Believe you me, I'm just as hungry as you are.” -page 40
Posted by TheNamesJackson 6 years ago Report
I posted four times on this page. Someone end me.
Posted by Rendezvore 6 years ago Report
Woah, mousie got himself a new pair of whiskers. o.o