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Little Lamia in the Big City - Ch. 44 By Aces

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Little Lamia in the Big City (REDUX) is a crowd-funded series to rewrite an old vore story I had written back in 2010 about a chubby pink naga who has to learn to live in a modern city.

This chapter was funded by  thestalosj.

If you want to contribute to this story, send at least $60 USD to http://PayPal.me/JerTheAce/ and I'll write the next chapter ASAP.

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Naga relationships are more complicated than they seem.

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The-Lonely-Gamefreak

Posted by The-Lonely-Gamefreak 2 months ago

In this passage, "Meanwhile, Maria is rising up out of her seat, and begins slithering toward Kira and Maria to position herself for a strike"

I think you meant Umbra for the second time you mention Maria.

Aces

Posted by Aces 2 months ago

Thanks for spotting those. Corrections made.

The-Lonely-Gamefreak

Posted by The-Lonely-Gamefreak 2 months ago

Glad to help. I am absolutely captivated with the story hear. By now, I am nearly caught up and thoroughly enjoying seeing the world vividly through your words. Keep up the amazing work!