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Well, it’s finally done! Story 200! Depending on how you count, this is either my longest ever story, or my second longest after ‘Lost in Felarya’ (which was subdivided into chapters).
It’s an IVC story, about European qualifiers. Kim and Sahiba were created by, and belong to, bedfordsb, as do the characters of Oksana and Tiff (mentioned only), and the Vore Restaurant (mentioned only). Many other characters here were proposed (or requested) by readers. The characters of Abena, Anniki, Myrtille, Ida, Marlene, Summer, Simona, Manjit and Martin are entirely my own. (Though Martin will be loaned to dA reader ‘eccentrichousewife’ for further development after this.)
Be advised that the final part of this story contains two rather explicit toilet scenes, the first of which in particular is eroticised.
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Part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/442768
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Posted by Mouthplayer 6 years ago Report
Faved!
My comments are on DA.
Posted by passingthroughyou 6 years ago Report
New IVC! Wooooooo!
I think it would be sexy if Anni wore that T shirt when she's in bed with Gianni - or is that a bit disrespectful?
Good to have Kim back. I missed her.
Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report
It would be a bit confusing for Anni to wear a t-shirt that said she almost ate herself, no? But a definite mind-warp! ;)
Posted by kbDArt 9 months ago Report
I love the intertwining of many threads that you’ve done here. It’s somethingI’ve taken to doing with my stories as well. A good way to build plot and suspense. My next story will have the most character threads yet. I wrtie each seperately and then incorporate them together - kinda fun.
Posted by French_snack 8 months ago Report
It is, isn't it? It keeps things dynamic, and you can look forward to reaching and writing the next part with a particular character.