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A Day at The Beach By YoungBoyLover -- Report

A story I wrote a while ago, featuring a VERY horngry shota and his ever-so supportive Daddy.

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cvbeast

Posted by cvbeast 6 years ago Report

Hmm i liked where this was going with the dad and son until the unexplained suction

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YoungBoyLover

Posted by YoungBoyLover 6 years ago Report

It’s one of his voring powers, that’s how he vores people :P

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ZaaZaa

Posted by ZaaZaa 6 years ago Report

I'm kinda mad it took a vore fic for me to realize the pun on Cream and Cheese's names.

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ZaaZaa

Posted by ZaaZaa 6 years ago Report

Whoops. Clicked wrong thing sorry ;-;

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Jrew

Posted by Jrew 6 years ago Report

Got awkward at the suction part, as it just came out of nowhere and happened. Was hoping for more than a sentence mentioning the vore process. Otherwise it was okay.

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ILoveNeneko

Posted by ILoveNeneko 4 years ago Report

I know I shouldn't comment if I don't like something but... um... why?

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YoungBoyLover

Posted by YoungBoyLover 4 years ago Report

Why not?

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zant5

Posted by zant5 2 years ago Report

It's basically a sex fic. No vore. Except that one throwaway bit. But that was nothing.

Sad. :/

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