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Mia deals with the consequences of eating her boyfriend's body and spirit. The mage who sold her boyfriend the shrinking potion ends up being more useful than she thought.
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This is a follow up to Dream Come True. I couldn't resist continuing Mia's journey at Brian's expense.
This story is 100% soul vore.
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Posted by Anokesz 6 years ago Report
I'm enjoying the ride almost as much as Mia. Hope for both our sake there is more to cum :)
Posted by MPennanti 6 years ago Report
I may have some ideas. :3
Posted by FaultyVault 6 years ago Report
Great sequel. You really captured the essence of someone drunk on power. I remember one of the comments I made on your previous stories in which the justification for eating someone as dear as family member felt a little light. Gotta say there was really none of that disbelief here. Her transition from the necessity of "it's me or them" all the way to full-blown soul-eating pleasure tyrant felt very believable and was really a lot of fun to read.
Part of me does want to see her get taken down a peg now though. Seems to me she might be getting just a teeny bit too big for her boot. She wasn't aware of the existence of magic until what - a week ago? And she's already devouring souls and taking sex slaves? That's very bold : P
Keep doing what you're doing man. If you had a tip jar I'd buy you a coffee.
Posted by MPennanti 6 years ago Report
High praise! Thank you for your kind words.
You are correct that if she continues on her present course she's bound to run into creatures that are better left alone...
Perhaps one of these days I'll get over being distracted by new ideas and get into comeuppance territory in one of these storylines. :D
If you really wanted to hurl coffee money at me, you can try using the Patreon I've put zero effort into pimping ( https://www.patreon.com/MPennanti ) but don't feel any obligation. <3
Posted by VVVx 6 years ago Report
This was one of the best soul vore stories I've read.
Posted by MPennanti 6 years ago Report
Too kind <3
Posted by MPennanti 5 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it!
I want to say yes to your question, but I have been very bad at making time to write lately. I do plan to continue it, though I can't promise when the next bit will come out.
Posted by Blahblahbum 5 years ago Report
Rereading this series, I hope we'll get to see more of this amazing predator, perhaps visiting a school for young witches and devouring a bunch of delicious young girls to become a mighty goddess of sex and power.
Posted by MPennanti 5 years ago Report
Being able to do magic on her own is definitely a goal she has. :3